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作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-18 23:36
标题: 繭
本帖最后由幽篁听箫于 2017-4-4 16:16 编辑

他是春天深夜, 在艾农庄出生, 不足重的, 纯白色的, 一只... 小公猪宝宝.
因为与他同胞出生, 还有十只健康, 足重的兄弟姊妹, 艾先生在清晨忙完之后, 便打算把他 " 解决 " 了, 以免日后浪费了粮食, 却又养不起来...
艾先生拿着斧头, 走出屋外, 却被早起的八岁女儿, 艾奋儿挡住去路. " 如果我出生时, 又小又不足磅, 您也会把我 ` 解决 ` 吗? "
奋儿是他的第一个红颜知己, 大他八岁. 他始终记得, 当天奋儿救下他之后, 是如何轻轻地抱着他, 以奶瓶耐心地喂牛奶给他喝...
奋儿望着他白净的小耳朵, 在清晨的微曦中泛着粉色... " 魏白耳! ", 当她坐的校车, 即将开到学校的时候, 她决定了这个她认为是最棒的名字.
他开始在奋儿家的厨房打地舖. 他与奋儿渡过了, 或许是他这一生中, 最无忧虑的一个春天!
每天早上, 依偎在奋儿的怀里吃奶. 中午过后, 等着奋儿下学玩耍. 傍晚时分, 享受与奋儿全家一起谈笑.
五个礼拜之后, 艾先生说, 他已长得够大, 可以卖出去了. 由于奋儿的求情, 他被卖至离奋儿家不远的叔伯的农场. 开始住家禽农舍. 他是唯一的小家畜.
他不习惯. 百无聊赖. 奋儿只能放学后来看他.
晚上与鸡, 鸭, 鹅, 有一搭没一搭地聊着... 从热心的公鹅母鹅夫妻口中知晓, 像他这样的春猪, 是绝对过不了冬的. 一旦养得肥了, 便会在年终过节之时, 成为人们的桌上佳肴...
他知道, 这事是奋儿没有办法救他的. 他想逃. 他决定逃. 他逃了... 可是, 奋儿叔伯农场的帮手, 一会儿的功夫, 便找着了他. 他的肚子开始饿起来... 他决定还是回家的好.
日复一日, 养胖增肥. 有一雨夜, 倍感寂寞之时, 他仿彿听到, " 魏白耳! 你想有一个朋友吗? 我来做你的朋友. 我来看顾你. 我喜欢你! "
他四处探头寻找, 都看不到任何仍醒着的家禽... " 去睡吧! 你明天就能看到我了. "

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-18 23:38
本帖最后由幽篁听箫于 2017-4-4 16:18 编辑

天明, 他靠着雾气, 微光, 顺着细细的声音寻去... " 请看走道旁上面的角落... " 在晶莹剔透, 万道霞光中, 他找到了声音的主人...
端坐在朝阳反射露珠而成的水晶簾幕里, " 好漂亮呀! " 那是一灰色的蜘蛛, 在挪大的网上与他打招呼, " 早啊, 你是说我漂亮吗? 谢谢! "
他的双眼, 几乎无法直视于蜘蛛网的光芒万丈, 但仍忍不住想看... " 好高兴终于见到了, 我能知道你的名字吗? "
" 夏绿睇... 是我的名字. 我知道你叫魏白耳. "
" 啊, 妳是女孩儿! 妳的网结得好漂亮. 妳的声音也好似音乐般地甜美. "
盛夏, 大家都困扰于蚊虫的侵害. 他非常佩服她对积极除去虫害的执着. 而她非常欣赏他真情豪放的性格. 他们渐渐成为最好的朋友.
她知道他害怕寂寞. 所以她在他睡舖头顶上的木架子旁, 结了一张网. 她总是在他睡前, 攀回这一张网, 看着他入睡. 她于是成为, 他每天睡前闭眼, 醒后张眼所见的唯一... 美女. 他有生以来的, 第二个红颜知己.
奋儿有一阵子没来了. 他知道, 奋儿与同班的傅汉理去夏令营了, 要到开学前才会回来. 奋儿是应该与同龄男孩子们交朋友的, 而不应该整天只与他这只猪... 头在一起.
他真真正正地要成为一只大肥猪头了... 怎么办? 是不是入冬之后, 就难逃他的宿命, 只得被卖走, 任人宰割?
在一个落雨的夜晚, 他把这个忧虑, 倾诉于她, " 夏绿睇, 我不想死... 我喜欢这里, 我不想离开... "
她只得, 在网上向他招手 ( 八只手 ), 因她抱不到他, " 魏白耳, 我会想办法, 不让他们杀你... 我答应你. "
" 妳是认真的么? 答应我不让他们... "
" 我这一生, 从没有这么认真过... 虽然我的一生, 比你的还要短的多. 可是, 我绝对不会让你死... "
" 妳有什么方法吗? "
" 我还不知道... 我要好好地想出一个计划来! "
等他鼾呼声起, 她便开始在网上踱步... 外面的雨, 仍是滴滴答答地落着... 怎么样才能救他, 救这只她最心爱的好猪.
终于, 她滑至网中心. 慢慢地, 把网线切开. 她, 优雅地, 划着弧线... 渐渐地, 中央部份的网线, 被拆除了, 呈现出一圆弧形的空白. 外面的雨, 渐渐停了.
她望向他... 看着他均匀的呼吸, 她深吸一口气... 开始在空白处, 结出新的网丝. 一丝一丝... 一缕一缕...
有几次, 他强壮的鼻息声, 惊扰了她的工作... 吓得她, 沿着网丝, 跌落了几步... 这真是一只猪头! 她微笑打着哈欠...
当天醒时, 大家都还未醒呢. 农舍里外都是雾气水珠...
一道天光, 隙了进来. 渐渐地, 游移至夏绿睇新结网上的露珠. 霎时万紫千红...
珠玉晶亮中, 有清清楚楚的两个大字...
" 好猪 " (SOME PIG)

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-18 23:40
本帖最后由幽篁听箫于 2017-4-4 16:19 编辑

" 这真是一个奇迹! " 每一位好奇围观的邻居, 都这样说. " 居然猪圈上面的蜘蛛网上写着字... 它一定是一只好猪. 连老天爷都这样说! "
他对这些突如奇来的注意力, 真不知如何是好. 奋儿的叔伯, 已吩咐帮手, 下午时分, 给他加一餐点心.
他深深地望着她, 轻轻地道谢. " 妳要是能与我一起享用点心, 那有多好. 这样妳就不必辛苦地织网捕虫了. "
" 我喜欢勤劳工作后, 充实愉快的感觉. " 她高兴地说, " 你还喜欢我写字的作品吗? "
" 妳真是好! 妳一定很聪明, 读很多书... " 他羨慕地揪着她看.
" 也没有啦... ", 她泛红着双颊, " 我闲时就喜欢写... "
她转头回避他炙热的目光, " 下一次我写一个更棒的. " 她喃喃地说...
一个礼拜以后, 农场帮手一早提着猪饲. 刚踏进猪圈, 就看到魏白耳精神抖擞, 直挺挺地站着. 一抬头, 一片蜘蛛网上写着一个大字...
" 棒 " (TERRIFIC)
这一回真的是棒! 不仅全体镇民奔走相告, 争着排队来一睹他的面貌; 而且镇上的牧师, 也借重他的奇迹来传道. 之后, 更引起传播媒体的注意, 记者已经约好日子要来做采访.
" 妳不要这么辛苦地替我写字嘛... " 他对她说, " 妳也要多吃一些. 妳看起来好像很累的样子... "
" 我累是另有原因的啦. 我好替你高兴噢... ", 她转话题, " 你若成名了, 说不一定, 他们就会留下你, 而不杀你了. "
" 但愿如此! 这样, 我就可以永远地与妳在这里, 快乐地生活下去了! " 他笑起来了... 全身上下流露着迷人的光采. 就如同太阳一般的... 亮. 她无法移开停留在他身上的目光... 她有感觉... 她不能自已...
就在记者约好来采访的当天凌晨, 她为他又织写下...
" 亮 " (RADIANT)
他站在金黄色的阳光下, 雄赳赳气昂昂的模样, 真是超亮! 他的两眼射出自信, 双唇吐气如虹! 当采访结束, 镁光灯闪起时, 他多么希望, 她在他身边...
" 你今天真是容光焕发 ", 她兴奋地说, " 今天记者一直夸赞你, 建议他们带你去参加下礼拜的县农业展览会. 他们也不是已经决定给你报名参展了? 你一定可以获奖, 赢得一些奖金, 那么他们就绝对会把你留下来了... "
" 我没有那么好啦. 那都是牛奶澡的功劳. 早上他们不是先帮我用牛奶, 好好地洗了一次... " 他做了一个擦背的表情...
她噗吱地笑出来, " 你好谦虚噢! "
" 妳... 妳... 妳能不能陪我一起去参展? " 他低下头, " 我并不是要妳去那里再替我写字 ", 他的声音愈来愈小, 几乎听不见, " 我只希望妳能在我身边... "
" 我还真是想去那里再写字. 我也想在你身边 ", 她还是听见了... 她的声音变得强而有力, " 可是我还是留下来, 把一些工作完成比较好... "
" 什么工作呀? "
" 产卵宝宝... 时候快到了... 在那之前, 我必须做一个把卵宝宝放进去的繭... "
" 哇! 是真的吗? 我不知道妳那么的... 多才多艺 "
" 我有责任要照顾家庭. 如果时候还未到, 我一定会陪你去. 你... 你的成语用错了啦... "
" 对不起... ", 他很认真地说. 她知道, 他刚才不是在开她的玩笑. " 我应该像妳一样多读书. 妳来教我好不好? "

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-18 23:42
本帖最后由幽篁听箫于 2017-4-4 16:19 编辑

要起程去县农业展览会的当天一早... " 妳还好吗? " 他耽心她. " 我... 嗯... 我想... 是可以陪你一起去的. " 她慢慢地爬上载他的货车.
傍晚时分, 他们终于开到了热闹的会场. 她得以休息了一整天, 看起来精神好一些了. 她观察四周, 发现他在比赛场地所分配到的猪圈的旁边, 是一只比他壮硕的猪... " 这里好像很好玩, 我出去溜鞑一会儿... " 她等他安顿妥当, 就借故出去.
" 妳知道吗? 刚才所有参加比赛的猪一起过磅. 我旁边住的这位最重. 我只是第三... " 他的鼻子往旁边的方向, 扭了一扭.
" 没有关系... 我出去绕一圈的时候有看到. 这位猪兄, 不告诉我名字, 一点都不友善. 说话大声又吵, 真是没有礼貌. 而且, 没有你一半乾净. 我不喜欢. 我想, 第二重的那位, 也一定好不到那里去. 天下猪公一般样. 真想不透, 你为什么是那么的不同. 虽然不容易击败他们, 我一定会帮你... "
" 小姐... 只可惜妳不是评审委员. 非常谢谢你的赞美. 我受之有愧... 这... 这句成语有没有用错? "
" 好一位谦虚的先生... 这一次没有用错! "
夜深猪静. 夜凉如水.
她在靠近他的屋檐上织出了...
" 谦 " (HUMBLE)
然而, 她还不得休息... 她还在工作...
隔天一早, 他一睁眼, 就看到了她新写的字. 一起身, 正要谢她, 却见她就在他头顶的木头上, 好安静地, 坐在一个比她的身形约十倍大的, 粉桃色的, 像是棉花糖般的一个圆形物体上. 而她似乎一夜之间变小了...
" 妳是醒着的吗? " 他细声问.
" 是的... " 她微弱地回答...
" 那是什么东西呀? 是妳做的吗? "
" 是我做的... 它是我放卵宝宝的繭. 它是我很好的作品. 是我所做过... 最精致的东西. "
" 里面有什么吗? 有卵宝宝吗? "
" 五百一十四个卵宝宝. 我一个一个的数下去... 让自己的脑筋有事可做. "
" 真是一个好完美, 漂亮的卵宝宝繭! " 他很高兴地说着. 仿彿就像是他自己打造出来的一样.
" 是的, 它真是漂亮! " 她用她的两只前脚轻轻的拍着... " 它也蛮坚固的. 是我用我最强韧的物质做成的. 而且, 它还防水. 这样, 里面的卵宝宝, 就会很温暖而乾燥. "
" 妳真的会有五百一十四个子女吗? " 他梦想着...
" 是呀... 如果一切都顺利的话. 而他们要到明年春天才会出来... " 他注意到, 她的声音, 变得忧伤了起来.
" 妳怎么了? 不是应该高兴吗? "
" 没有啦... 我只是觉得我大约看不到他们... 我很不舒服... 我觉得好衰弱... 不过, 不要替我耽心啦. 今天是你的大日子. 我对你有信心... "

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-18 23:44
本帖最后由幽篁听箫于 2017-4-4 16:20 编辑

" 各位女士, 先生, 我们现在把这次比赛的首奖, 颁发给魏白耳! 大家一定记得, 初夏之时, 我们第一次看见神奇的字体, 出现在魏白耳头顶的蜘蛛网上, 使得我们开始注意他的与众不同. 我们渐渐地发现, 他温良, 有礼, 乾净, 清爽, 真正是谦虚, 明亮, 最棒的一只好猪! 至今我们仍是无法解释, 这些超自然的字体现象发生的原因. 然而又有何妨... 让我们怀着感恩的心, 为魏白耳感到骄傲. 让我们尊敬他的生命. 让我们陪伴他, 快乐, 自由的生活, 直到永远... "
仍坐在繭上的夏绿睇, 远远地都可以清楚的听到, 大家为他的得奖而欢呼的声音. 万岁! 万岁! 她想以最后吐出的丝线, 划过空间, 滑至窗台... 她想看看... 而她终究只走了一点点... 与她的繭一起正落在魏白耳的床上.
她静静地闭上双眼...
" 夏绿睇... 我得奖了! 夏绿睇... 妳到底在那里... 在那里... 我们要准备回家了! " 大约真的是他的声音把她唤回来的. " 妳在这儿啊. 还好我看到了妳的繭. 妳知道我得首奖了吗? 咦... 妳今天真的好安静. 妳还好吗? "
" 我... 不... 好... 我... 一... 点... 都... 不... 好... 可是, 我... 好... 高兴... 你... 今天的成功, 以一... 小部份来说... 也就是我的成功... 从此你会... 活... 下去.. 安全而健康地生活下去... 没有什么... 会... 伤害你的... 秋天... 要来了... 你会送走枫红... 迎... 接飘雪的冬季... 你会送... 走圣诞... 等待拂面的... 春风... 看到我... 五百一十... 四只宝宝... 而我... 都无... 法做到... "
第一次... 在她面前... 泪... 滑落他的面颊... " 妳为什么替我做那么多? 我不值得妳这样的对我... 我从来没有替妳做过什么... "
" 你... 有... 你一直就... 是我的好朋友. 而这就是... 对我而言... 最好的事... "
他听到外面已经准备好要开车离开的声音... " 来, 慢慢来, 带着妳的繭, 我们要回家了. "
" 我... 早已没有... 力气爬了... 我也没有丝了... 事实上... 我回不... 回去都一样了... 我随时都可能... "
" 那... 那... 妳的繭怎么办? 展览会一结束, 这片地方就会变回死寂. 妳的繭绝不能留在这儿... " 他从来没有像这一刻, 那么的痛恨自己只是一只笨重的猪. 没有灵活的手脚, 来抱她上车, 或拿起她的繭一起走.
他把头低下, 仔细想... 快快想... 他的口鼻, 碰到了她的繭... 他想到了! 只有这一个可行的方法...
他非常小心地, 以他的口, 含起她的繭. 慢慢地, 把它放到他的舌头上面. 他记得她曾说过, 她的繭是防水的, 而且十分坚固. 他感觉舌头上面痒痒的. 而且他有一点开始在流口水.
他必须要走了. 他没有办法说话... 他对她眨了一下眼睛. 她知道, 这是他唯一能与她道别的方法. 她吐出, " 再见! " 她用尽全身仅有的力气, 举起她的一只前脚, 挥向他... 他们...
她从此没有再动过.

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-18 23:45
本帖最后由幽篁听箫于 2017-4-4 16:20 编辑

他整整含着她的繭八个小时. 一路上, 他没有一次想要把它放下来. 他怕货车的颠簸, 会伤了它... 他们...
一到家, 他轻轻地把她的五百一十四只未出世的子女, 好好地放在一个安全的角落.
夏去秋来, 秋去冬来, 看似简单. 然而魏白耳知道, 对于他来说, 一切来得都不简单. 圣诞节前, 他终于得以看到生命中的第一场雪, 全都归因于她, 感谢于她. 他知道, 他仍得以看到生命中第二年的雪, 第三年的雪... 他第一次问自己, 他要怎样的来渡过生命中多出来的这些年... 他现在没有答案...
初见飘雪的兴奋, 完全没有让他忘记他的责任. 每一个寒冷的夜晚, 他会试图靠近她的... 他的繭睡, 使得他的气息, 可以暖一暖它... 他们... 他照顾着他们, 就像他们是他的子女. 这个世界上, 再没有任何东西比他们珍贵了.
他耐心地等着春天的到来. 他耐心地等着她的, 他们的小宝宝的到来. 他满怀感激. 他觉得他的生命好富足.
一个春日清晨, 他照例地看顾着她的繭... 他的繭... 他发觉有什么动静. 他走前一步, 细着看... 一只小小的蜘蛛, 从繭里爬了出来. 它不比一粒细沙大. 它是灰灰的, 而它长得就像夏绿睇!
回过神来, 魏白耳发觉自己在颤抖... 小小蜘蛛在与他招手. 他再细看, 又有两只爬了出来, 在与他招手. " 嗨! 你们好. 我是你们妈妈的老朋友. 我真高兴终于看到你们了! 一切都好吗? " 其中一只小小蜘蛛, 好像说了一声好, 可是声音太小, 他听不到.
接下来的几天几夜, 小小蜘蛛们, 一只只爬了出来. 爬上, 爬下. 再过些日子, 他们长大了些. 开始在繭旁, 织起小小的网.
一个清晨, 暖风彿面. 空气中, 有甜甜春天潮湿的泥土味...
一只小蜘蛛, 爬上了籬笆顶. 把头抬了起来. 顺着风, 吹着丝线... 几条丝线, 像是风筝一样的飘着... 在魏白耳惊奇地注视之下, 小蜘蛛一蹬脚, 即随风飘了起来. " 拜拜! " 小蜘蛛对他说. " 等一等啊! 你要去那里呀? " 小蜘蛛已被风吹得不见踪影.
接着, 一只只小蜘蛛在他眼前, 重复地上演着同样的一幕... 不一会的功夫, 天上满是载着小蜘蛛的细细风筝. " 孩子们, 回来吧! " 他叫着, 却没有回应.
他难过得回去躺下. 却发现, 有一只小蜘蛛, 坐在靠近夏绿睇以前的位子... " 你... 你怎么没有与他们一起飞走? "
" 因为我发觉, 我就喜欢这儿. 你不要伤心. 我来做你的朋友. 我喜欢你! "
魏白耳不伤心了. " 那为什么你其他的兄, 弟, 姊, 妹要走? "
" 那是我们的一种生活方式. 我们随着暖风, 带我们去任何地方织网生活. 而我们也像风一样自由. 随时随风可走, 或随遇而安... "
" 你说话的深度, 好像... " 他的话还没说完, 就被小蜘蛛打断. " 你看, 还有我的好几个兄, 弟, 姊, 妹留这里呀... " 唉! 你毕竟不像她... 她是绝对不会打断我说话的. 他心里一面想, 一面朝着小蜘蛛指的方向看过去... 是呀... 不是吗...
他与她的子女, 她的孙子女, 她的曾孙子女... 一直过着快乐的生活.
他不曾忘记她.
虽然她的子女, 她的孙子女, 曾孙子女... 都很可爱. 可是没有另一只蜘蛛, 能够取代她在他心中的位置.
她是唯一的.

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-19 00:01
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取材改编自童话故事 "Charlotte's Web" by Mr. E. B. White. 原着共二十二章, 一百八十四页. 这是适合大人们念给四岁以上小朋友们听, 或六岁以上小朋友们自己读的故事. 谢谢!
贴此故事的原因稍後请详见...
*^_^*

作者: 树皮 时间: 2004-6-19 07:55
本帖最后由幽篁听箫于 2017-4-4 16:24 编辑

做题目的那个字不认识，怎么读写的？

作者: cathy96 时间: 2004-6-19 08:17
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树皮：我觉得应该是茧。可能繁简体转换的那个软件有问题。
notafanyet：改编得很好，用来表述你对阿旭的一片丹心也很贴切。很有点春蚕到死丝方尽的意思。感动ING。

作者: jjmm 时间: 2004-6-19 10:32
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好美的故事，令人唏嘘！
正应了那个道理：喜欢你，不因为你是最好的；喜欢你，让你成为最好的；喜欢你，你就是那个最好的！

作者: kikico 时间: 2004-6-19 10:34
本帖最后由幽篁听箫于 2017-4-4 16:17 编辑

似乎看过这只叫茧的小猪的动画片呢!
很可爱的故事!又有意义!
谢谢notafanyet

作者: zoe 时间: 2004-6-19 11:00
喜欢你，不因为你是最好的；喜欢你，让你成为最好的；喜欢你，你就是那个最好的！

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正是此理

notafanyet贴的这个故事，颇有用意啊，一是表达了于旭之心意，一是有感于《哥们的故事》中一片叶子之朋友情。

于旭，旭迷，坤，坤迷，及推而广之所有的各类FANS，何尝不是如此。

能够在观片追星的过程中，还能不断的开阔自己的心胸，改变思维的角度，也是一件乐事。

作者: cathy96 时间: 2004-6-19 11:25

下面引用由 kikico 在 2004/06/19 10:34:58 发表的内容：
似乎看过这只叫茧的小猪的动画片呢!很可爱的故事!又有意义!

是这个，夏洛特的网

[这个贴子最后由cathy96在 2004/06/19 20:32:02 编辑]

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-20 05:21
謝謝朋友們與版主!  繁體繭即是簡體茧 *^_^*  多謝!  看那魏白耳多可愛... 夏綠蒂即在左上方啊 *^_^*

"Charlotte's Web" 是我最喜歡的童話.  這部兒童文學經典中的四大角色... Charlotte ( 蜘蛛小姐 ), Wilbur  ( 粉豬先生 ), Fern ( 八歲女孩 ), 與 Templeton ( 肥大老鼠 ), 於我而言就好似成人世界的經典 " 飄 " 中的 Scarlett  ( 郝思嘉 ), Rhett ( 白瑞德 ), Ashley ( 衛希禮 ),  與 Melanie ( 韓梅蘭 )... 每一角色即是一具有代表性發人深省的個性特質!

陳坤... some terrific, radiant, and humble guy *^_^*

以下是我在言承旭港灣所貼出的 " 感謝 ".

" 他第一次問自己, 他要怎樣的來渡過生命中多出來的這些年... "

或許大家不相信, 愚笨如我, 前兩天晚上, 寫完上面的這一句話之後, 整整望著它, 發呆十分鐘...  然後, 考慮是否要安排魏白耳, 競選鎮上的家畜代表, 為廣大的畜民爭取權益; 或是, 成為農場的義工, 投身服務同胞的神聖行列; 又不然, 以獲首獎的獎金, 擁有自己的農場; 再不然, 真的被好萊塢星探相中, 主演 " 三隻小豬旭集 " 的... 豬老大? 當然不是... 豬二哥? 也不是... 一定是最勤勞的... 豬小弟嘛!

最後, 我一個字都沒打出來 ( 偷懶嘛 ).  只以一句 " 他現在沒有答案... " 來結束這一段.

這些個月來, 我最感謝阿旭的, 並不是經由知道了他, 而使我以前的人生聚焦; 也並非只是經由知道了他, 而讓我現在的人生更美...  我想對我而言, 最重要的是經由知道了他, 而使我再次仔細思考, 面對未來的人生.  無論我未來的人生, 容不容許一直會有他的消息...

我自己都不曉得, 我的未來會如何.  我又怎知道, 魏白耳的未來會如何?  而我曉得, 魏白耳經由認識了夏綠睇, 使得他以後的人生, 實質上不會空白, 雖然夏綠睇在形體上已離他遠去...

雖然, 在前幾天一直打得很慢, 使我對於自已這種如蝸牛爬般的速度, 非常地沮喪.  然而, 我經歷了從未有過的, 用母語構思時的愉樂.  我非常感謝小蠍以及她的美文, 賜給我一個機會, 來改寫這個我最喜歡, 而又非常熟悉的兒童故事, 來獻給她與... 他...

我從未見過他.  我只能用我在論壇得以知道的他, 加上我所有的想像, 來刻劃他的魏白耳.

事實上, 由於我笨, 要把一個純粹友情的童話, 改編成一個愛情故事, 對我而言, 是難度極高的挑戰.  而又如何以對話的方式, 來表達出我想像中的他的好, 與小蠍的美?  真是讓我嚐到什麼是 " 腦袋瓜的盡頭 " (at my wits` end).

慶幸的是, 上蒼在整整半世紀之前, 即安排了西方的白先生 ("Charlotte`s Web" 的原著 Mr. E. B. White) 賜給我們四字真言, " 好 " ("SOME GUY (PIG)"), " 棒 " ("TERRIFIC"), " 亮 " ("RADIANT"), 和 " 謙 " ("HUMBLE"), 來確切地的描繪四分之一世紀之後, 在東方出生的阿旭的特質.

在童話裡, 這四字真言, 巧妙地鋪陳了屬於夏綠睇與魏白耳傳奇的基石.  在現實生活中, 這四字真言, 智慧地演譯出, 我們認識阿旭過程的由外在至內在, 由淺至深.

在童話裡, 夏綠睇對魏白耳的純與真的先知先覺, 如同母親篤信孩子的良與善.  而為了救他, 變出了一個 " 轟動武林, 驚動萬教 " 的魔法, " 使得我們開始注意他的與眾不同 ".  在現實生活中, 柴小姐的 " 流星花園 ", 就是這魔法.  然後, 在童話裡, " 我們漸漸地發現, 他... 真正是謙虛, 明亮, 最棒的一隻好豬 ".  在現實生活中, 就如同 Koogigi 所說的 " 那一瞬間我的思維在此定格 ", 我們成為信仰他的使徒 *^_^*

在對他的信仰中, 我尤其感動於他對於小朋友們自然關懷所流露的真情.  這也就是為什麼, 我驚訝於, 童話中魏白耳決定 " 以繭為己任 " 的結尾, 與現實生活中的他給我個人的感覺, 完全契合!

我甚至認為, 他不僅僅愛他所愛之人之所愛...  他愛他們, 是源於他知道生命本身並不輕易, 於是他對於生命的本身珍惜, 對於生命的本身尊重.  而無關小朋友是否為自己的子女.

我們期待阿旭脫穎而出, 榮獲首獎的一天, 很多天!

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-20 11:23
你问我爱你有多深

即将要睡觉觉的小白兔宝宝, 紧紧地握住兔妈妈的长耳朵...

他要确信, 妈妈有在注意听着. " 猜一猜我有多爱妳好么? "

" 噢, 小白兔呀... 我想我猜不出来啦, " 妈妈温柔地说.

" 这么多, " 小白兔一面说着, 一面用力地往两侧伸展他的双臂.

妈妈有更长的双臂... " 而我爱你这么多, " 妈妈用力地往两侧伸展她的双臂.

嗯, 那有好多噢... 小白兔想.

" 我爱妳像我的手能往上伸地这么高, " 小白兔说.

" 而我爱你像我的双臂能往上伸地这么高, " 妈妈笑着说.

那很高了... 小白兔想. " 我如果有那么长的手就好了. "

然后, 小白兔想到了一个好主意. 他翻转得让自己头下脚上, 再把双脚靠在一棵树干旁尽量伸直.

" 我爱妳像从地上一直到我的脚趾能伸地这么高, " 小白兔说.

" 而我爱你像从地上一直到你的脚趾能到地这么高, " 妈妈轻轻地牵着小白兔, 然后以双臂把他头下脚上地荡至空中.

小白兔高兴地笑了出来... 妈妈放开他后, 他开始上上下下地跳来跳去, " 我爱妳像我能跳起来地这么高. "

" 而我爱你像我能跳起来地这么高. " 妈妈好快乐地说. 妈妈一跳起来, 高到耳朵都碰到树的枝叶呢.

妈妈跳地很棒呀... 小白兔想. " 我如果能跳地那么棒就好了. "

之后, 小白兔望着平野, 叫向妈妈, " 我爱妳像这条路一直下去, 一直到那条河的尽头地那么远. "

" 而我爱你像穿过了河, 越过了那座山头地那么远, " 妈妈深深地望着他说.

那是真的好远噢... 小白兔想. 他已经好睏好睏了... 几几乎乎不能再想下去了...

他回头略过荆棘的树林, 远眺渐暗的天... 没有什么比星空还要远了吧... 他想.

" 我爱妳直到月亮地那么远, " 他慢慢闭上双眼...

" 噢, 那好远哪, " 妈妈静静地抱起他来, " 那真的是好远好远哪. "

妈妈小心翼翼地把他放在树叶小床上.

她靠近他, 亲吻他晚安.

然后, 她在他旁边躺下, 微笑地耳语... " 而我爱你直到月亮... 再绕回来... 地这么深... "

-------- 献给母兼父职的陈坤妈妈阿旭妈妈 --- 祝您们父亲节快乐 ( 美国即是今天, 六月第三个星期日 )

翻译自 "Guess How Much I Love You" by Sam McBratney. 这是适合大人们念给两岁以上小朋友们听的故事. 谢谢!

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-20 11:32
妈妈与他讲的 " 房子的故事 "

一群埚牛, 住在一颗新鲜多汁的包心菜之中...

埚牛们一个个背着自己的房子, 缓缓地游移于菜叶之间, 努力地寻找香嫩的地方, 可以好好地一口咬下去...

有一天, 一只小埚牛对他的妈妈说, " 将来我长大了, 一定要拥有全宇宙最大的房子! "

" 别说傻话啦, 孩子! " 小埚牛的妈妈说话了... 小埚牛的妈妈, 恰巧是这一颗包心菜之中, 最有智慧的埚牛.

" 有一些东西, 还是小一点比较好... " 然后, 她开始讲一个故事...

很久很久以前, 有一只小埚牛, 就像你一样的一只小埚牛. 有一天, 小埚牛对他的妈妈说, " 将来我长大了, 一定要拥有全宇宙最大的房子. "

" 有一些东西, 还是小一点比较好... " 他的妈妈说, " 还是保持你的房子轻巧, 容易背得动吧. "
可是, 小埚牛不听呀. 他躲在包心菜大叶子的蔽荫之下, 而他又尝试巧妙地盘旋, 与挛动... 直到, 他真的发现了如何让他的房子变大...

他的房子变大, 再变大... 包心菜之中的埚牛们都说, " 哇! 你的的确确拥有全宇宙最大的房子! "

小埚牛继续地盘旋, 与挛动, 直到他的房子变得像瓜那么大. 然后他又学会, 把尾部迅速地从左至右移动, 使得在房子上变出尖凸的角出来. 再又学会压挤, 与推冲, 加上他很用力很用力地渴求, 他居然做到了增添鲜艳的色彩, 与美丽的设计在他的大房子上.

他知道他的房子, 真的是全宇宙最大, 与最漂亮的了. 他感到非常骄傲, 与高兴.

一群蝴蝶从空中飞过...

" 你们看! " 一只蝴蝶说. " 一座大教堂耶! "

" 不是啦, " 另一只蝴蝶说, " 是一个马戏团啦! "

蝴蝶们绝对猜不到, 他们方才注视的, 是一只埚牛的房子.

还有, 一家子的青蛙, 在他们旅游去另一个池塘的途中, 不由自主地停下来惊叹. " 从来没有, " 他们后来告诉亲戚们, " 从来没有看过那样了不得的景象. 一只普通的埚牛, 居然有一个像生日蛋糕一样漂亮的房子. "

有一天, 当埚牛们已经吃完了所有的嫩叶子, 而只剩下一些茎干之时, 埚牛们于是就转移到了另一颗包心菜之中. 可是, 这只小埚牛, 啊呀, 却不得动弹了. 他的房子实在是太重了.

他被留了下来...

因为, 实在是没有东西可吃, 他... 渐渐地... 衰弱... 凋零... 只剩下房子... 后来, 连房子也一点一点地塌陷了, 碎灭了... 直到... 最后什么都不剩下... 一切都不存在了...

" 这就是故事的结尾. " 埚牛妈妈对小埚牛说, " 我的故事讲完了. " 埚牛妈妈发现小埚牛几乎已快哭出来了...

小埚牛然后想到了他自己的房子. " 我要把我的房子保持的轻巧, " 他想, " 将来我长大以后, 就可以去任何我想去的地方... "

终于... 有一天, 他... 轻巧地, 愉快地, 继旭去看这世界...
他得以欣赏...

有些叶片, 轻盈地迎风拍翅... 有些叶片, 沉重地垂首落地...

当黑幕破晓, 云石晶莹地迎接晨曦...

宇宙中, 居然有圆点花样的蘑菇... 上有高塔般的花梗... 上有小花摇曳招手...

松果自在地躺在羊齿植物的丝缎绿荫下... 卵石恣意地躺在沙巢... 犹如平滑圆润的斑鸠蛋...

青苔固守着巖石, 抱紧着树皮...

嫩芽蓓蕾加上清晨的露珠, 真是甘甜沁凉的美食...

埚牛很快乐... 很快乐... 他知道, 只要他快乐, 他的妈妈就快乐...

日换星移, 季节周转, 埚牛始终不曾忘记妈妈与他讲的故事.

每当有朋友问起, " 为什么你是这样小的房子? " 他即会说起这个妈妈与他讲的房子的故事...

翻译自 "The Biggest House in the World" by Leo Lionni. 这是适合大人们念给四岁以上小朋友们听的寓言故事. 谢谢!

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-20 13:29
永无止境

当年, 没有人预期像那样弱小的一个女婴, 可以存活过第一个生日. 在一九四零年, 美国田纳西州的克拉克茨维尔, 一个出生时重不到一九零零公克的婴儿, 她的人生, 确实是受到限制的.

可是, 大部份的婴儿, 都没有十九个哥哥姊姊一起来看护他们. 大部份的婴儿, 都没有一个懂得很多家庭小偏方的妈妈, 以及一个兼好几分工作的爸爸...

大部份的婴儿, 都不是陆微码.

微码后来的确庆祝了她的周岁生日! 而且, 每个人都注意到, 当一学会走路, 她就用跑的或跳的了.

她还是很另人耽心的... 她一直好瘦小, 又常生病. 如果有任何一个哥哥姊姊感冒, 她一定感冒, 而且加倍地严重. 哥哥姊姊得麻疹, 她也得麻疹, 同时患腮腺炎, 再加上出水痘.

陆妈妈总是在家照顾一年到头都生病的她. 看医生对于陆家来说是极为奢侈的事. 况且, 整个克拉克茨维尔, 就只有一位医生, 愿意替黑人看病.

就在快满五岁时, 她生病得特别严重. 哥哥姊姊把家里所有的毛毯, 都盖在她身上, 给她保暖.

那次的病, 使得她的左腿往内侧弯曲, 无法还原伸直...

医生说, 微码不仅染上猩红热, 而且她还得了小儿麻痺症. 在那个年代, 大部份得小儿麻痺症的小孩, 不是病死就是终生跛脚. 没有药能医得好的.

她得病的消息, 传遍了整个克拉克茨维尔... " 微码, 那么一个活蹦乱跳的小女孩, 将永远无法走路了. "

可是, 当她病好后, 仍是像以往一样地好动. 她就用一只脚, 在家里面跳着... 跳着到屋外... 而且在星期天, 跳着去教堂.

陆妈妈一直鼓励着她. 事实上, 陆妈妈每天有好多的事要做... 烧饭, 洗衣, 把面粉袋缝制成衣服给小孩... 总共有二十二个小孩子了. 就算是那么地忙, 陆妈妈仍是会抽出时间, 每星期两次的带微码坐公车, 到离家最近的愿意治疗黑人的医院去看病. 那是在八十公里之外的大城纳许维尔的医院. 她们每次都只能坐在公车最后边的座位. 那里是唯一允许让黑人坐的位置.

医院的医生与护士们, 帮助微码做复健运动, 好使得她麻痺的腿变得强壮. 她在家里也一直在练习复健, 那怕是很痛的...

最让她感到痛的, 却是因为她不能正常地走路, 而学校不愿意收她. 每天微码眼睁睁地望着哥哥姊姊去上学, 就留下她一人孤独地流着眼泪... 终于, 厌倦了自己的哭哭啼啼... 她下定决心, 无论如何要想办法上学!

在微码辛辛苦苦地练习之下, 医生说可以准备用钢脚架, 套在她的左腿上, 来支持着走路了. 这样就不需用跳的, 而终于有可能可以上学了!

可是, 学校却不是她想像中那么快乐的地方. 同学们取笑她的钢脚架. 在学校运动场打球, 与游戏活动的时间里, 她只能坐在边上, 无奈地做旁观者. 她开始仔细研究其他的孩子... 记得他们跑步的动作, 观察他们如何把球投入篮筐里...

微码以做更多的腿部运动, 来克服她无法在运动场上打球的忧伤. 全家人都鼓励她, 给她加油. 而她也尽全力, 不使家人替她耽心. 有时, 她的左腿好像真的渐渐地有力量了起来; 而有时, 却就只是好痛好痛...

有一个礼拜天, 在去教堂的途中, 她感觉腿特别地舒服. 一直以来, 微码与家人, 从他们对神的信仰中, 感受到了无比的力量. 而教堂是她最最喜欢的地方. 她认识的每一个人, 都去教堂. 在教堂里, 他们谈话, 说笑, 欢唱, 祈祷... 教堂应该是她来试试做做这辈子最勇敢的事的地方吧...

当大家鱼贯地进入教堂之时, 她踌躇不前... 圣歌的乐声围绕着她... 她打开钢脚架... 把它放在教堂的前门. 一个深呼吸, 她慢慢地移动着她的左脚, 放到右脚之前... 她的膝盖静静地颤抖着... 她告诉自己, 专注地深呼吸... 一步... 一步...

教堂之内, 耳语泛开... " 陆微码在走路耶... " " 陆微码能走路了! " 人们的头一排一排地转向她, 而她缓缓地走向她的家人... 她庞大的家庭, 她认识的朋友, 她学校的同学, 每一个人都张着滚大的眼珠... 赞美的圣歌, 一直未停... 乐声的音潮, 像是涌出了墙, 直达外面的树林. 终于, 微码走到家人旁边, 开始唱圣歌. 她脸上藏不住微笑...

微码自此之后, 继续不断地练习走路. 当她十二岁之时, 她已可以不再需要靠钢脚架了. 于是有一天, 当她与陆妈妈把钢脚架装进盒里, 寄回给医院之后, 她知道她的新生命就此开始 :)))

微码立刻投身入篮球场. 这些年, 都只能坐着看同学打球, 而篮球早已成为她的最爱. 她虽然清瘦, 却已不再细小. 她修长的双腿, 推动着她在篮球场上生龙活虎. 她早已熟知所有的规则与技巧.

上高中时, 她带领着学校的篮球队, 在州内南征北讨, 终于打进了田纳西州冠军赛. 然而, 她与她的球队, 却出乎大家意料之外地在冠军赛中输了球!

微码这几年已习惯了赢球. 输了球的她, 沉重地将自己摔坐在椅上... 她惯常的生气蓬勃, 消失地无影无踪.

在那场篮球冠军赛中, 有一位大学教练看中了微码的球技. 而更让教练欣赏的, 是她的跑步. 教练希望她能来参加大学的田径队.

经由教练的帮助, 微码获得了田纳西州立大学的运动员全额奖学金. 她成为陆家第一位念大学的子弟!

更胜于此的是... 自她寄回钢脚架的八年之后, 微码的飞毛腿, 以及多年的苦练有成, 带着她从田纳西州的克拉克茨维尔, 至数千哩之外的义大利! 一九六零年夏天, 她抵达了罗马. 以一位短跑女选手, 代表美国参加奥林匹克运动会!

能参与奥运, 对微码而言, 已是光荣的胜利! 她能得奖牌的胜算, 确实是受到限制的. 其他国家的选手, 都有比她跑得快的记录. 而一九六零年的罗马奥运会, 是有史以来第一次以电视转播. 选手们都知道, 将会有上亿的观众收看. 这来自四面八方的压力大的惊人. 不巧地, 微码在刚抵罗马时, 不慎扭伤了脚踝. 在她比赛的第一天, 仍肿胀着隐隐作痛...

当轮到微码比赛之时, 她即忘记了她的脚踝, 以及其他任何不相关的事. 她专注地向前冲, 不再去想她的惧怕, 她的疼痛, 或是飞出她脸上的汗水. 她比她以往的哪一次都跑得好! 她比其他任何一位选手都跑得快!

陆微码赢得了女子百米短跑的金牌! 她同时赢得了全世界的注意.

因此, 当女子两百米短跑比赛之时, 她优雅细致的长腿已举世闻名. 当比赛即将开始时, 她的耳边嗡嗡地充满了万千群众呼喊她名字的加油声. 这样热烈的支持, 帮助了她不去理会开始飘落下的雨滴... 当开跑的枪声响起的瞬间, 她奔腾澎湃地融入潮湿的空气... 以犹如龙卷风的速度向前... 当她冲过终点之时, 她知道她又做到了! 她得到了第二面金牌! 微码因双重的胜利, 兴奋不已... 观众极近疯狂...

接下来, 还剩下女子四百米接力. 微码的一队, 面临最艰难的比赛. 做为第四位, 也就是最后一位接力跑者, 是她, 要冲过终点线.

微码的队友们都跑得很好, 接力棒也传得很好. 她们这一队保持领先! 当她准备好向第三名队友接下棒子时, 她差一点把接力棒跌至地上... 当她接稳棒子之后, 另外有两队的最后一名跑者, 已超过了她, 一下子她们这队落至第三...

自从那天微码打开钢脚架, 缓缓地迈开步伐于教堂的走道时起, 她就深切地了解集中精神的力量.

当她的脚已开跑, 她便运用她的精神力量来做功. 在最后关头, 以近似激电地无比神速, 她超前了! 以几分之一秒的微小差距, 她第一个冲过终点! 来自观众席如闪电雷亟般的欢呼, 即如同她已如闪电雷亟般的心跳. 她创造了历史! 她赢得了第三面金牌!

当她高耸直立地站在奖台上, 她的第三面金牌缓缓地挂入她的项颈之时, 她就如同一位女皇!

陆微码, 一位曾是克拉克茨维尔最病重的女婴, 日后竟成为全世界跑得最快的女子!

翻译自 "Wilma Unlimited" by Kathleen Krull. 这是一个给六岁至九岁儿童自己读的真实故事. 谢谢!

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-20 13:38
变色龙

大象是灰色的
金鱼是红色的
鹦鹉是绿色的
猪是粉红色的

每一种动物, 与生俱来外表就有固定的颜色... 除了变色龙之外. 他们走到那里, 外表变色到那里.

站在柠檬上, 变色龙是黄色的.
在老虎身上, 变色龙是条纹的.

一天, 坐在老虎尾巴上的一只变色龙, 对自己说, " 如果我可以一直停留在绿叶子上面的话, 那么, 我永远就会是绿色的了. 这样的话, 我也会有固定的颜色了! " 他一面这样高兴地想着, 一面小心地爬上了一片最绿的叶子.

可是, 到了秋天, 叶子变黄; 变色龙也变成黄色的了. 再接下来, 冬风寒飕飕地, 把叶子吹下了树枝; 变色龙也随着叶片, 跌了下来.

在冬季长长的夜里, 变色龙是整身的黑!

N 个寒暑之后, 在初春明媚的金光里, 他一天下来, 不期然地察觉到了另一只变色龙的存在. 这只变色龙妹妹, 握着一片夕阳反射下闪闪发光的叶子!

然后有一天, 当他爬到树顶上看日出, 春风暖暖地吹淡他的颜色... 心旷神怡之际, 他看到变色龙妹妹正缓缓地爬上树顶...

之后又一天, 当他热昏了头, 慢慢地爬向水塘边, 看到变色龙妹妹已盛好了水在叶片里, 正往他这方向招手, 请他去喝水...

" 谢谢妹妹... 我叫妳妹妹好了... 我看见几个月了呢... "

" 哥哥不谢... 过了几个月了, 你终于开口跟我说话! 我... 已经注意你两年多了... 你一直爬来爬去... 好像在找东西... 你在找什么吗? "

" 其实, 也没有找什么... 我只是觉得, 我们变色龙蛮身不由己的... 我们没有与生俱来固定的颜色. 走到那里, 外表变色到那里. 如果说, 我真的在找什么, 我想, 我在找一个属于自己的本色... "

" 我也有相同的感觉... 不过, 我有些鸭朋友, 他们不喜欢自己的灰, 却渴望鹅的白; 而我有些鹅朋友, 他们不喜欢自己的白, 却渴望鸭的灰. 可是, 他们又不能改变自己的颜色... "

" 对耶, 妹妹, 这真是烦恼... "

" 不要不开心呀... 我们的外表能变色, 或许是一个令鸭与鹅羨慕的优点呢! 我有时想... 外表有固定的颜色, 真的就比较好吗? 我只要知道我内心是什么颜色, 就好了呀... 或许, 现在我们的外表没有自己满意的颜色, 可是, 我们有一辈子的时间去寻找! 如果你愿意的话, 我们可以结伴一起, 一起去找呀... "

" 好! 我们一起! 我们是会走到那里, 变色到那里, 然而... 我们一直会是同一种颜色! "

于是, 两只变色龙一直, 一直地在一起... 在彼此的旁边...

秋天, 他们的身体一起在枫叶上变红... 冬天, 他们的嘴唇一起在雪地里变白... 春天, 他们的脸色一起在嫩枝头变绿... 夏天, 他们的尾巴一起在蕈菇中变斑点...

渐渐地, 两只变色龙发觉, 要找到一个满意颜色的这件事, 并不是最重要的了. 因为, 或许没有一种动物, 会一直只显现一种颜色... 外表的颜色, 终究还是可能随着环境而改变...

最重要的是, 他们始终不会忘记自己的颜色!

他们随时只要望着彼此, 就会知道自己是什么颜色!

取材/翻译自 "A Color of His Own" by Mr. Leo Lionni. 这是适合大人们念给壹岁以上小朋友们听的故事. 谢谢!

作者: kikico 时间: 2004-6-20 14:18
谢谢notafanyet
真的很喜欢这些故事
都是外国故事转译的吗？
各国的儿童故事虽然不相同，
却各有特点呀!

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-20 14:34
謝謝! " 各国的儿童故事虽然不相同，却各有特点呀 " 握手! 殊途同歸 *^_^*

我喜歡在床邊唸書給即將要睡覺的小朋友聽. 一面增強小朋友讀與寫的能力. 這些都是我自己很喜歡的兒童故事. 阿旭喜歡童話世界... 我在編 "Jerry's Fables" *^_^*

作者: youyouchihu 时间: 2004-6-20 16:12
再看此文，依然感动。grace你的感情一直这样长久而淡定，依稀记得小蝎也曾如此形容过你。不过欠扁的说一句，好怀念你的英文帖哦。＾V ＾

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-22 05:11
謝謝妳, 姐妹! 自從學會打中文就不方便用英文發主題帖了啦... 除了寫字典 Jerrytionary. 最近在奮鬥 Jerrytionary - N 中的近兩百個單字加上句子.

陳坤的英文名字 Aloys 很是少見. 我查了很多地方才找到. 此名源於日耳曼民族 ( Teutonic) 的男子名. 名字的意思是指在戰爭中有名的 (famous in war), 像戰爭的 (warlike), 或是指偉大的戰役 (mighty battle). Jerry 源於希臘... 意思是 holy.

作者: jjmm 时间: 2004-6-22 10:39

下面引用由 notafanyet 在 2004/06/22 05:11:35 发表的内容：
陳坤的英文名字 Aloys 很是少見. 我查了很多地方才找到. 此名源於日耳曼民族 ( Teutonic) 的男子名. 名字的意思是指在戰爭中有名的 (famous in war), 像戰爭的 (warlike), 或是指偉大的戰役..

难怪陈坤总是说自己好斗、不服输，连个外文名字都想告诉世界——和我练，你输定了！

呵呵……

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-24 05:40
除了希望陳坤不服輸勇敢堅強如勇士般不畏懼地馳騁於戰場... 可以就像金甲 " 戰 " 神與烈火狂刀劍舞的戰場; 也可以是他由小自大的生活戰場... 做 Aloys... 還希望他時而做一下變色龍 (chameleon) 保護自己 *^_^*

作者: kikico 时间: 2004-6-24 07:28

下面引用由 jjmm 在 2004/06/22 10:39:34 发表的内容：
难怪陈坤总是说自己好斗、不服输，连个外文名字都想告诉世界——和我练，你输定了！呵呵……

也不知是他自己取的，还别人取的呢。有点意思

作者: jjmm 时间: 2004-6-25 23:19
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美国作家E.B.怀特1952年的作品《夏洛的网》1979年曾出版过，但现在已经很难见到了。“这些年来总是找不到活着的感觉，看了《夏洛的网》，才知道生活是什么。”网络译本的翻译者肖毛就为了这样的感受，自己翻译并在网络上发布了这个经典童话，也带动起了一大批的“夏洛迷”。现在，这本被誉为“宝书”的《夏洛的网》经过长达五年的版权谈判，由著名儿童文学作家任溶溶、终于上海译文出版社出版。
在朱克曼家的谷仓里，快乐地生活着一群动物，其中小猪威尔伯和蜘蛛夏洛建立了最真挚的友谊。然而，一个最丑恶的消息打破了谷仓的平静，威尔伯未来的命运竟是成为熏肉火腿。作为一只猪，悲痛绝望的威尔伯似乎只能接受任人宰割的命运了，然而，看似渺小的夏洛却说：“我救你”。于是，夏洛用自己的丝在猪栏上织出了被人类视为奇迹的网上文字，彻底逆转了威尔伯的命运，终于让它在集市的大赛中赢得特别奖，和一个安享天命的未来。但，这时，蜘蛛夏洛的生命却走到的尽头……
在《精灵鼠小弟》的作者、美国大作家E·B·怀特的笔下，夏洛用蜘蛛丝编织了一张爱的大网，这网挽救了威尔伯的生命，更激起你我心中无尽的爱与温情。

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作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-27 10:31
謝謝 Jjmm! " 有时候，半夜里醒过来，摸摸胸口还在跳，就会很高兴，因为活着... " 很高興在這世上除了這本書外, 還有其他一些事物給我這種感覺... 比如這裡 *^_^*

" 亚马孙网上书店 " 上這部書的封面...

http://www.amazon.com/gp/reader/0060282983/ref=sib_dp_pt/104-4185080-3353522#reader-page

作者: 汀汀小慧 时间: 2004-6-27 16:07
喜欢这个故事~

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-30 15:21
谢谢! 有坤迷朋友在

http://www.ichenkun.com/chenkun/topic.asp?whichpage=26&forum_id=9&topic_id=695

帖中提及 " 流星花园 " 第一部与第二部之不同. 请容许我在这里贴一点我自己的感想...

真

如果是以纯真 ( 贞节 ) 的观点来看感情, 那么我认为, 流星花园 ( 第一部 ) 中, 第一章是在交代道明寺如何地爱上了杉菜; 而自第二章至第十九章总共十八章里, 是在交代杉菜如何才慢慢地爱上了道明寺...

这里指的奉献 " 纯真 ", 并不一定需要与 " 婚姻的承诺 " 有因果关系. 而绝对与 " 真爱 " 有因果关系.

寺与杉菜并非一见锺情. 这整齣剧的问题, 就出在 " 一见锺情 " 这四字...

这整齣剧中唯一的 " 一见锺情 ", 是发生在观众对于花泽类. 说笑啦... 这整齣剧中唯一的 " 一见锺情 ", 是发生在杉菜对于花泽类...

如果没有这一见锺情, 那么第一章交代了寺如何爱上杉菜, 再第二章交代杉菜如何爱上寺... 流星花园只需两章就可以结束了, 根本不需十九章, 也就没有流星花园这部偶像剧了. 那也就没有阿旭, 以及 F4 了...555... 那也就没有流星花园第二部了 *^_^*

若看至第三章中间, 大家在游艇的甲板上吃寺做的生鱼片那一段, 而知道了寺原来仍保有处子之身, 再回想第一章中后段, 当寺请手下, 把杉菜矇着眼睛从学校绑回家, 替她美容, 梳装, 而后在挪大的起居室, 提议许可让她成为他的女人之时, 寺就是在表达他对于杉菜的爱意. 因为他愿意把他所珍视的纯真, 与她分享. 因为他愿意成为她的男人.

当我最初看这段时, 只是觉得有趣. 因为寺的红上衣造型, 与某人的很像, 而且这段两人的台词很搞笑.

后来每看一次, 都是感动... 因为, 寺真的是蠢蠢地, 纯纯地爱上了这个叫杉菜的, 倔强的, 带种的女人. 他并不需要详细地知道她的过去, 与现在. 他甚至在那时, 并不清楚她是否仍保有纯真... 他只想献上他的... 与她共有... 未来.

寺并没有对杉菜一见锺情, 却在第一章中后段, 就做出这样的决定. 他真的蠢吗?

编剧告诉我们, 他整整泡了两次澡, 才做出这样的决定滴. 一次在室外的, 维时较短; 而后在室内的, 维时超过五个钟头...

寺从与杉菜的宣战中, 发现她不仅富正义感地友爱同学, 更有坚强的战斗力量... 居然还敢打他这位大少爷. 这正是除了 F3 与姐姐之外, 从小到大几乎在身边找不着的... 或许正是他感觉失落的... 居然在这女人身上找到...

还有, 居然自己视为从小到大最好的朋友类, 对她也特别...

编剧到此, 只花了不到一章的篇幅, 就已完整地交代了寺如何爱上杉菜. 而这些为什么的答案, 几乎含盖了一般男人会对女人产生感情的充分必要条件... 不需知道她什么过去, 只要她拥有他所珍视的, 而他所欠缺的内在美, 以及满足他一丝丝有竞争的虚荣心理.

唯一剩下的, 就是外在美这个对他而言, 并不是顶重要的问题. 杉菜比起英德其他的女生, 实在是抱歉一些. 虽然寺自视是世界上最完美的男人, 他的女人平凡一点没有关系, 或许他还是有一点点的不确定... 因此, 才把杉菜绑了来, 证明她的外在, 的确是块可以琢磨的璞玉...

至此, 他成功证明, " 本少爷是有 size 的... " 他对杉菜的情感, 是有依据的.

然而杉菜对他呢? 杉菜并没有对寺一见锺情. 这女人对男人的情感, 就是较长的思考, 十八倍的长考... 当然一部份是拜类所赐...

我实在想说, 我个人在看流星花园之时, 从没有感觉杉菜故意刁难寺. 她的内心一直在挣扎... 她的反反覆覆, 不能说她就是长考的女人, 而一部份因为那唯一的 " 一见锺情 ".

既然观众都对类一见锺情, 那我们可以十分理解, 为什么杉菜对于类一见锺情; 更何况她真以为, 他几次的搭救是有一点意义的... 直到她亲眼目睹, 他看静学姐的眼神.

只是, 类已投影在她的波心... 她就只有这方小小的波心.

原本当她在甲板上吃生鱼片, 而获知寺仍是处子之时, 她应该想得到, 他曾要让她成为他的女人; 她应该因此而欣赏, 他对纯真的执着... 那就如同她对于自己纯真的执着...

可是, 当时她对他的美好, 却是无动于衷. 这就如同一般女人, 一个她没有感情的男人的任何优点, 对她而言, 都是无足轻重的. 而女人考虑她有感情的男人的一切!

那时在甲板上, 她的心已快跳出口... 因为, 她稍早时无意间窥见类与静的亲密.

以对类这样的情怀, 在类追静离开之后, 杉菜虽然尝试开始接纳寺, 我仍是可以感觉, 她内心的极不确定.

就算杉菜因醉酒, 上旅馆事件, 再次被同学欺负, 而寺来搭救, 说出, " 只要妳说没有, 我就相信妳. " 这样感动她的话, 她始终以为, 心里仍放不进寺. 她还没有潜意识地开始比较类与寺.

而她在类独自一人忧郁返国, 意识到他突然转变性格, 对女孩子开放起来... 她对他自然的关心, 对我而言是合理的. 夜晚在渡假海滩, 两人碎心的吻, 与其说是对寺的背叛, 不如说是他俩成全对方的心意来的恰当.

坦白说, 到了这里, 我对寺与杉菜不抱任何希望的. 直到杉菜与类的第一次约会, 她潜意识地开始比较类与寺, 想到了寺会比较体贴... 我想寺从败部复活了.

从此, 在杉菜心中, 寺与类是一起出现的了...

到了蓝球比赛之时, 寺为了杉菜, 最后几秒放弃. 当晚, 杉菜与类客房中的谈话, 与自己的并未主动, 在在显示寺在她心中的地位渐渐地扩大...

直到日后, 在商店街边主动的自后方拥抱寺, 与在校园内主动的亲吻寺, 杉菜实实在在地, 一步一步地确认自己的心意.

这个确认的过程, 对于杉菜与寺来说, 都是漫长而痛苦的. 我认为却是必要的.

因为杉菜对类的一见锺情, 使得杉菜与寺绕了一大圈; 而就因为这最初杉菜对类的一见锺情, 使得杉菜在认知了对寺的情感之后, 终于跨出了一见锺情的迷思, 看到了寺真爱的纯真, 而义无反顾地与寺坚持至最终.

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-30 15:22
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我认为偶像剧 " 流星花园 " ( 第一部 ) 中所描绘的杉菜, 是一位考虑得非常周详的女孩.

她是中产家庭里的独生女. 就算清楚地知道家里是父亲一人工作, 而做家庭主妇的母亲, 为了女儿的未来, 硬着头皮送女儿念贵族大学, 又租好地区的大房子以提高身分... 做为独生女儿的她, 仍是可以不用考虑父母亲的负担, 而恣意地, 优渥地享受着她的青春年华.

可是, 我所看到的杉菜, 在第一章认识 F4 之前, 在第七章父亲失业之前, 她就是一个蛮注重课业, 不花钱买什么衣服, 而且还在蛋糕店打工的朴实女孩.

她与不拘小节, 天真爽朗的父母亲的频繁互动, 使我感觉有时是她把父母亲当做小孩在哄, 在宠... 她一直在体谅他们的负担, 考虑着家庭的经济.

杉菜从小到大的好同学陈青和说, 她从小就友爱同学. 念高中时, 为了保护同学, 惹上大姐大. 与她一起打工的小优也说, 在以前的学校里, 杉菜常为了同学, 仗义直言. 这些对于杉菜的叙述, 与独生子女大都很重视, 考虑到朋友的说法, 不谋而合.

通常, 母亲对于女儿的影响是很深的... 或许远超过我能查觉到的. 在杉菜身上也是如此. 杉菜妈把大钱花在宝贝女儿重要的教育上. 其次花钱在中国人很重视的门面上. 在其次花钱在丈夫, 女儿的营养上. 可是对她自己, 却也是蛮朴实的. 比如说做头发, 也是自己动手做.

杉菜妈潜意识里, 对于杉菜爸在事业上的高不成低不就, 应该是真有些不满意滴. 或许她对丈夫的做事能力有怀疑. 因此我相信, 虽然杉菜妈坚持送女儿去贵族大学, 也不纯粹是为了吊金龟婿. 而是希望, 杉菜能有傲人的学识, 而将来不必一定要靠丈夫, 也可以过得很好.

这是一个很重要的信息.

我认为, 杉菜在成长的过程中, 接收到了这个凡事还是要靠自己有能力的信息.

我一直记得这些杉菜的特质. 而以这些印象, 观看后来她与道明寺的分分合合, 就真的不怎么奇怪了.

杉菜对于朋友考虑周到, 救助同学李真, 因而在第一章认识了 F4. 第三章, 寺因杉菜在游艇上吻了他, 以为她喜欢自己... 而后知道杉菜与花泽类常在学校顶楼见面, 竟然失控, 追至楼梯强吻杉菜. 事后, 赠送希望她穿去静学姐生日会的礼服陪罪.

杉菜又对于朋友考虑周到, 把礼服转送给李真. 却使李真在第四章静生日会时, 被寺奚落, 心生对杉菜的狠意. 在第五章李真设计让杉菜醉酒, 上旅馆等事, 让寺误会, 让杉菜又被同学欺负. 却弄拙成巧, 被寺救回家疗伤, 得以多认识寺...

杉菜对于朋友考虑周到. 为了不希望类伤心, 居然在第四章向静下跪, 间接地鼓舞类追静出国的勇气, 而也使自己见不到心里的人. 却又弄拙成巧, 使得寺提出第一次约会的邀请, 又得以多认识寺...

因此, 杉菜对于朋友的考虑周到, 是有历史滴. 而且, 她在用心地替朋友们设想之时, 并没有把自己的利益考虑进去. 这一点也是很有历史滴. 而后果往往使自己饱受身心煎熬, 却又常有意想不到的弄拙成巧, 更是有历史滴 *^_^*

而第四章中, 因淋雨, 寺生病, 只得在楼梯间与寺渡过他们单独的第一夜的那个约会, 的确有增进杉菜与寺的相互了解. 不过在那时, 虽然类已出国, 杉菜的心仍是属意温柔平和的类, 而非粗暴狂野的寺. 她在楼梯间对生病的寺的体贴照顾, 对我而言, 像是母亲对孩子的亲情. 而第二章中, 杉菜陪类在学校顶楼上渡过他们单独的第一夜里, 那种倾心地关怀, 才是女孩对男孩的爱意.

第五章中, 杉菜怕寺发现她酒醉, 上旅馆. 那时, 她不是怕寺知道后伤心难过, 而是怕他知道后对她再施以暴力. 所以, 我认为那时寺仍未在她心里撒下感情的种子. 因为, 在她心里, 他那次强吻的阴影仍在.

直到第六章, 杉菜与类第一次正式约会时, 禁不住地想起了寺的体贴... 我认为杉菜首次把寺真正地放进心里, 首次真正地注意起他的优点. 第七章篮球比赛前一夜的电线竿旁, 杉菜首次面对寺的热情拥吻, 几近投降. 首次感觉发自寺身上的男性魅力... 这, 才是他们真正的开始...

篮球比赛之夜的客房里, 是什么原因使得杉菜没有向一见锺情的类主动献身? 那是因为, 她想都没有想过... 那是因为, 她渐渐走出对类一见锺情的迷思. 于是, 第二天一早, 寺在楼上面对她在窗台的背影的哭泣... 是白哭了... 是肯定阿旭的演技, 赚我们的热泪 *^_^*

杉菜对于家庭考虑周到. 第七章父亲失业后, 第八章又把以高利贷借的钱输光, 印证了母亲对于父亲做事能力的怀疑. 我认为杉菜因连续的家庭变故, 在这两章之中, 内心的成长更多. 我很佩服她在深思熟虑之下, 没有因面子问题, 使一家人走上绝路. 她自己出面, 向寺借钱, 心态上俨然已是一家之主. 她承担起了家庭的责任.

自第八章寺两天内就从纽约飞回, 类独自失落地于 " 成全之歌 " 的背景音乐中拉琴... 之后, 走出一见锺情迷思的杉菜, 却又走进了考虑家庭, 朋友, 以及靠自己能力等信念交织成的更大的迷 " 网 "... 杉菜找多打工的机会, 就是想急着还钱, 好与寺保持平等的地位. 因为她真的想与寺好好地交往...

小顺事件, 是杉菜唯一没有考虑周到的一次... 因为她刚陷入了新的迷惘里, 不清楚自己该如何走下去... 因她太想尽早与寺平等开始... 可见那时, 寺在她心里已多么重要.

对杉菜而言, 寺冒死相救, 以她从小对于朋友, 家庭考虑周到, 以及靠自己能力等信念来说, 是非常感动, 却不太能接受的事. 她内心的挣扎, 比戏里 " 暴龙与小白兔的对话 " 更为强烈. 她对于紧接着而来的, 从寺家庭方面的压力, 以及匹配寺近乎完美的小滋的出现, 简直是压着她, 没有任何喘息的空间.

在十一, 十二章中, 当她发现自己的身, 心都已深深沦陷于寺时, 她是非常徬惶的. 正因为她对于自己的家庭, 朋友考虑周到, 她便会为寺的家庭, 朋友考虑周到.

正因为她有凡事要靠自己有能力的信念, 她接受玉嫂的挑战, 以劳力换取在道明家的食宿. 正因为她有凡事要靠自己有能力的信念, 她不接受玉嫂的安排, 不以与寺生米煮成熟饭的方式, 强迫道明家的认同! 她要打一场公平的仗! 殊不知, 成人的世界, 是没有多少公平可言的...

寺的母亲, 当然攻击杉菜对于朋友考虑周到的这一点...

如果杉菜不因此而牺牲自己, 考虑朋友, 而选择为爱与寺在一起, 那她就不是杉菜了... 只要她是杉菜, 她就不可能有第二种决定...

从渔村回学校继旭念书, 专心学业, 也是源于凡事要靠自己有能力的信念.

我想真实的亚门, 教会了杉菜正视自己. 为别人考虑太多, 只会模糊自己的焦点. 杉菜亦从寺对她的执着, 在他绝食的房门口外, 体会到只要真爱, 两人的努力, 绝对胜过自己一人能力的坚持!

快乐地手牵着手, 消失在街头人群中的杉菜与寺, 是个自独立, 相互平等的! 自第一章寺的口头上硬, 许可杉菜成为他的女人以来, 至第十九章末尾杉菜的口头上软, 终于对寺说出 " 我喜欢你 " 为止, 这个乌托邦最令我神往的, 不是 F4 的人间绝色, 或万贯家财.

而是寺与杉菜为对方的真爱, 互守纯真, 达到男女真正平等的理想 *^_^*

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-30 15:26
自省 - 未尝先嫌 1

曾经提起, 我有一位大学的同系学长就叫 Jerry. 而他后来娶了我的高中同班同学, 是外文系高材生的 Nina. 最正确的说法, Nina 是英语系的高材生... 师大英语系的高材生. 那年夏天大学毕业后, 她舍弃分发至南部家乡大城市的热门国中教书的机会, 而申请至 Jerry 当兵的所在地桃园教书.

我非常清楚地记得, 那年暑假在她回乡小住, 又北上之后的七月三十一日, 我们几个高中同学聚会, 庆祝我们大学毕业后崭新的人生. 我们本来在热闹了一整晚之后, 打算再移师我家, 聊到天亮... 而由于 Nina 的一段哲学, 使我们的聚会提早于十一时结束... 使我一直记得那个夏季, 那个与 " 流星花园 " 第二部中, F4 大学毕业的那个同样寓意深刻的夏季...

( 是的... 对不起... 我将会提到 " 流星花园 " 第二部. 请不想再度伤心的朋友们, 不妨略过这帖子吧. )

Nina 说, 她的教育学教授, 曾经特别地提醒他们, 夏天毕业了, 而他们一直到七月三十一日, 仍具有大学学生身分. 万一出了什么事, 大学还是以保护学生的立场来帮忙. 而大学学生的责任较轻.

然而, 自八月一日, 领中学教师的薪水开始, 他们不再具有大学学生身分, 而正正式式地被视为中学教师, 虽然中学还未开学, 还未踏上讲台. 万一出了什么事, 中学教师应负的责任, 远较大学学生应负的责任为重.

因此, 七月三十一日, 是她做为学生的最后一天. 当午夜十二点的钟声敲下之后, 她即永远与只需为自己负责的学生时代告别, 而踏入不仅为自己负责, 也需为别人负责的世界. 这个明显的分水岭, 大概比二十二年前, 脱离母体, 剪断脐带的剧变, 有过之而无不及.

因此, 七月三十一日的全部花费, 都是由 Nina 请客. 因为她从八月一日起, 可以不劳而获几个星期.

刚于昨天连续三晚地看完三十一片的 " 流星花园 " 第二部. 之后, 我一直在面壁反省自己这三个月来的未尝先嫌...

" 流星花园 " 第二部的四位编剧小姐, 先生们, 想要用 F4 大学毕业典礼后, 这场受尽争议的道明寺的失忆车祸, 来寓意什么样的剧变? 脱离母体的剧变? 七月三十一日午夜十二点钟声敲下的剧变? 两者皆不是? 还是两者皆是?

现在想想, 我们这位 Nina 小姐, 还与 Elsa 蛮像滴... 喜爱搬出哲学自娱... 真怀疑编剧中, 是否有哪一位认识 Nina, 以她为 Elsa 的蓝本...

我想, 若用 Elsa 这番名来称呼 ( 就如同我用我的番名 Grace ), 而不用中文名, 或许我们接受她的程度, 可以相对地提高 *^_^*

在第一章中, 我看到了制作上, 力求一贯性, 与连续性的强烈企图心... 比如, 寺在中正机场, 预备搭机去西班牙的那一小节中, 左手一直有着一件黑色的外套... 与杉菜吵架时拿着它... 向杉菜对不起时拿着它... 花泽类交给他那封关键的信时, 寺是紧紧地挽着它... ( 我们以前什么时候看到寺的任何机场戏, 拿着外套? )

这微不足道的一点, 就是要向观众合理地解释, 寺接下了类的信后, 有把它放进这件黑色外套的口袋. 寺出车祸的前一晚, 第一次拿出信来看了之后, 还是有把它放回了这件黑色外套的右口袋里面. 而在第二章中, 当杉菜拿着寺的这件黑色外套, 与藤堂静再次回到教堂, 随后又穿起它, 然后自外套的右口袋里取手机之时, 信从口袋里掉了出来...

说到手机, 在 " 流星花园 " 第二部中, 可以说是运用到了现今科技的尖端. 在第一章中, 寺与杉菜以手机在巴赛隆纳拍照, 然后传回在台北的 F3, 实在是卖弄 F4 多金, 爱炫的好点子...

说到好点子... 在第一章... 初开场时, 以玫瑰花瓣在进校园的车道上, 排出 " F4 不要走 "; 以 " 一 " 架 " 真 " 直升机, 在毕业典礼结束时洒玫瑰花瓣... 寺与杉菜在巴赛隆纳合吃一块草莓蛋糕, 而寺说出以一辈子来还杉菜草莓的甜蜜; 随后引出高总裁与张婆婆的三十年海棉蛋糕之恋... 这些关于蛋糕的故事, 终于与第一部, 第二部杉菜 ( 第二部加上 Elsa ) 在蛋糕店打工, 牵上一些关系... 寺在巴赛隆纳街道, 交与杉菜他的幸福, 一红色气球, 是飞走了; 而后, 第二章杉菜在旅馆卧房里, 小心稳当地从满屋顶的气球中, 抓紧一红色的气球... 寺与杉菜在巴赛隆纳幸福的气球, 布满于旅馆卧房屋顶; 后来杉菜在第二章把这些气球放入空中; 再后来, 引出杉菜在 Broken Vow 的乐声中, 放手心形气球于空中的不幸... 寺与杉菜在巴赛隆纳旅馆卧房, 两人一起同一时间合写给 F3 明信片... 这些都是有一贯性, 与连续性的好点子! 鼓掌...

只是, 还是有 bugs... 比如, 寺与杉菜在巴赛隆纳喝喷泉水的前后, 是有拿着一本旅游书的... 等到看流星戒指, 及两人走散之时, 书也就随之与他们走散了...

看 " 流星花园 " 第二部第一章中最高兴的, 莫过于看到阿旭的寺, 在毕业典礼上与 F3, 以及在巴赛隆纳与杉菜, 无台词的一些轻松地, 开怀地搞笑, 以及游玩的镜头... 衷心希望, 二零零三年二月二十五日的他, 无论在世界哪一个城市, 都比在第一章中更轻松, 开怀地笑着...

待旭...

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-30 15:32
自省 - 未尝先嫌 2

随着 " 流星花园 " 第二部第一章结尾进入第二章, 编剧们开始向观众下药... 一次就下两计猛药...

一位短发的东方女子, 驾着银色的敞篷车驶来... 另一方, 寺愉快地驾着半路拦截借来的小红车, 高兴地在用耳机与杉菜打电话 ( 有没有看过如此清新可人, 戴着小耳机的阿旭? 晕... ) 而后拿出流星戒指...

流星戒指... 终究于数秒钟之后 failed 了寺... ( 还是终究 rebuilt 了寺 ? )

流星戒指... 终究终结了 " 横向 " 的 " 流星花园 " 第一部的神话...

随着流星戒指滑落寺已不再动弹的左手掌, 揭开了 " 纵向 " 的 " 流星花园 " 第二部神话的旭幕...

我想建议导演, 在流星戒指跌撞地滚至道路边的镜头里面, 最好能摄入一个参考物标 ( 比如路旁的一朵小花 ), 来明确地提醒观众, 这跌撞地滚至道路边的是有如戒指般大小的圆圈, 应该就是流星戒指. 而不是从小红车上可能掉落下来的任何汽车零件.

寺入院... 然后, 这位短发的东方女子开始张开嘴巴, 在寺身旁说话... 她说, 她名叫 Elsa...

我想, 若用这番名来称呼 ( 就如同我用我的番名 Grace ), 而不用中文名, 或许我们接受她的程度, 可以相对地提高 *^_^*

我们不禁开始问...

" 为什么硬要安排寺车祸后的失忆? "

" Elsa 这个角色为什么那么地爱讲话, 爱说一大堆所谓的哲理? "

" Elsa 这个角色 (Michelle Alicia Saram) 的笑声为什么这么地...? "

" Elsa 这个角色的戏份为什么这么地多? 是不是要给 Michelle 做第一女主角? "

先来谈谈这最后一个问题. 杉菜这个角色, 虽然在第二部的前半段, 与第一男主角寺的对手戏, 比起 Elsa 与寺的对手戏少, 但我认为, 杉菜这个角色, 的的确确是 " 流星花园 " 第二部中的第一女主角. 第一女主角不是 Elsa 这个角色. 第一女主角的定义, 并非是与第一男主角配戏最多的女角. 而是整齣戏里, 戏最多的女角. 美国电影 " 西雅图夜未眠 (Sleepless in Seattle) " 的第一女主角, 在电影里只有与第一男主角配戏数景而已.

" 流星花园 " 第一部的神话, " 横向 " 地取样 (sample) 了寺与杉菜认识后几个月的相处. 总共花了十九章的时间, 他们终于得以确认了彼此的感情. 虽然在结尾时, 寺与杉菜两个心态上平等的个体, 如任何一对平凡的恋人, 快乐地手牵着手消失在街头的人群中, 而我们仍是清楚地知道, 他们在某些生活方面来说, 并不平等, 并不平凡, 也就并不一定快乐...

比如, 寺仍是不知民间疾苦, 不知杉菜对于来自于道明枫的阻力的忧虑; 杉菜仍是不知寺对于她真心坚定的基础, 不知日后如何去面对, 与适应道明家族... 总括一言, 就是 " 真 " 与 " 虑 " 的不同, 贵族与平民之间的鸿沟...

我佩服 " 流星花园 " 第二部编剧们旺盛的企图心!

以我个人的看法, 他们并不仅只是想介绍所谓的 " 现实 " 给大学毕业后的 F4 认识 ( 自省 - 未尝先嫌 1 前半段所提到的 )...

他们根根本本, 彻彻底底地想要 " 纵向 " 地完成整个 " 流星花园 " 的神话!

他们想要寺与杉菜永远地, 平和地在一起! 而不仅只是几个月的吵吵闹闹.

于是, 他们企图以两计猛药 ( 寺车祸后的失忆, 与 Elsa 这个角色 ) 来抚平寺与杉菜之间, " 真 " 与 " 虑 " 的不同, 贵族与平民的鸿沟.

因为, 我想第二部的编剧们认为, 基本上杉菜不肖于 " 上 " 去, 也是 " 上 " 不去, 而道明枫更不让她轻易地 " 上 " 来, 融入寺的生活. 那么唯一的方法, 只有让寺 " 下 " 来, 融入杉菜的生活.

寺绝对是会有意愿尝试 " 下 " 来的. 可是, 以二十几年早已习惯高高在上的 " 旧我 ", 他的耐心有多少? 能坚持到多久? 会不会弄巧反拙? 以致两人最终分手?

所以, 只要寺仍是以 " 旧我 " 学习, 就避免不了原罪. 反之, 要避免原罪, 就只有以 " 新我 " 学习! 如何能有寺的 " 新我 "?

想要有非常的建设, 就必须有非常的破坏, 在神话中亦是如此 *^_^* 在神话中最大的好处, 就是可以安排出现, 在现实生活中机率近乎是零的事情发生!

于是, 寺为了杉菜, 买下了附有魔咒的流星戒指... 真的中了魔咒, 手握流星戒指, 发生车祸失忆...

即便是下一计猛药, 寺车祸失忆后, 拥有 " 新我 ", 却仍是不够的...

如果, 寺清醒之后, 一张开双眼, 看到的是... 毛泽东先生... *^_^* 那我们可以放心, 我们不需成天听哲理, 听异样笑声 *^_^* 然而, 或许寺如初生婴儿般的 " 新我 ", 学习毛语录, 成为共产党员. 这样, 杉菜或许又不太懂寺了... 如何来完成整个 " 流星花园 " 的神话? 所以, 让我们由衷地感谢第二部的编剧们, 没有发给毛泽东先生通告 *^_^*

如果, 寺清醒之后, 一张开双眼, 看到的是史怀哲先生, 那我们也可放心, 寺是绝对不会坠入情网, 做出所谓背叛杉菜的事. 然而, 或许寺如初生婴儿般的 " 新我 ", 学习人道精神, 只有大爱没有小爱, 决心追随史怀哲先生去非洲行医. 这样, 寺与杉菜的生活, 就又不会有交集. 所以, 让我们由衷地感谢第二部的编剧们, 没有请来史怀哲先生.

我们这样地想一想, 那么编剧们在第二章开始下的这第二计猛药, 安排 Elsa 这个角色, 是否可以说是不幸中的大幸?

寺清醒之后, 无论是情绪稳定之前, 还是之后, 大多是沉默无语的. 或许, 寺如初生婴儿般的 " 新我 ", 真是不晓得要说什么来表达内心的情绪. 试想, 如果 Elsa 也不多话, 这 " 流星花园 " 的神话, 如何继续上演? 所以, Elsa 的多话, 是这个角色的必要条件!

我以为, 寺清醒之后, 愿意在他身边照顾他, 鞤助他找亲人, 鼓励他恢复记忆的, 只要是善良的人, 而不是魔鬼就好. 但编剧们为了一石二鸟, 同时给寺如初生婴儿般的 " 新我 " 找一位生活启蒙老师, 日后才好与杉菜同一水平, Elsa 便需身兼二职, 承担下多话善良的人, 与天使哲人两个角色 :)))

编剧们期盼, 寺从与 Elsa 的相处中, 重新学习人与人之间基本的 " 信 " 任, 对于未知的希 " 望 ", 与男女之间美好的 " 爱 "!

编剧们希望, 寺能在他已重新归零的记忆里, 记下与杉菜一样的平凡生活的感动. 因此, 只要 Elsa 的哲学, 是寺能接受的哲学就好, 并不一定是观众欣赏的哲学 *^_^* 观众并没有车祸失忆. 观众仍拥有自己的亲人, 生活, 经验, 思想, 信仰, 与价值观. 所以, 或许 Elsa 的哲学, 观众不能接受, 那又有何妨?

Elsa 的笑声, 即像是铃声... 像是圣诞树上的铃声... 像是天使做了好事, 拥有翅膀之后发出的铃声 *^_^*

Elsa 是桥... 是寺与杉菜抵达永恒之前, 必经的桥... 抵达永恒之后, 桥的存在与否, 就根本不是一个议题了.

对于以这样一项使命而出现, 又身兼二职, 却不多领薪水的桥, 无论她在 " 流星花园 " 第二部中的哪一集出现, 与寺做什么事, 我都乐见其成 *^_^*

大家希望阿旭这次放假休息, 一觉醒来之后, 看到什么崭新的东西? 记下什么平凡的感动?

待旭...

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-6-30 15:38
自省 - 未尝先嫌 3

一切的一切, 起源于杉菜遇到了一只因为落单而附有魔咒的流星戒指. 而寺忠于对杉菜的感情, 决定去买这只流星戒指来对杉菜示爱... 魔咒应验, 寺出车祸失忆, 与 Elsa 认识... " 流星花园 " 第二部神话的起源不是其他, 就是寺对杉菜的爱啊!

而类在中正机场交给寺的那封关键性的信, 我个人认为, 不只是给了寺一个好主意, 邀约杉菜去巴赛隆纳近郊的教堂求婚. 事实上, 那封信的内容, 揭橥了 " 流星花园 " 第二部神话的寓意...

寺与杉菜, 将在这爱情圣殿, 许下誓言, " 在天使的祝福下, 得到永远的幸福 "...

当时, 寺与杉菜差别仍大, 两人的关系不上不下. 光是有一位我们都认同的天使 --- 类, 一个人的祝福仍是不够的. 类最多做到放弃杉菜, 以好朋友的立场支持寺与杉菜, 铺陈寺 " 形体上 " 准备好进教堂, 再把杉菜送进教堂. 第一次却拜流星戒指的魔咒所赐, 并未成功.

对不起, 我个人认真地以为, 寺与杉菜还须经由一位大部份的我们或许并不太认同的天使 --- Elsa, 做到放弃寺, 以好朋友的立场支持寺与杉菜, 铺陈寺 " 生活上 " 准备好进教堂, 再把杉菜送进教堂.

Elsa 的出现, 不是来加强流星戒指的魔咒的, 而是来帮助寺, 解除流星戒指的魔咒.

" 在天使的祝福下, 得到永远的幸福 "... 两位天使一起努力, 就绝对成功 *^_^*

第二位天使的努力...

记得第二章初, 傻哥到了医院后, 安慰 Elsa 说中国人讲 " 缘分 ", 事情所以发生, 肯定其来有自; 像 Elsa 那么好的人, 老天爷安排的绝不是坏事. 在那时不安的 Elsa 面前, 傻哥倒像是一个多话的哲学家 *^_^* Elsa 感谢傻哥, 而后傻哥还说, 这来自 " 天使 " 的赞美, 使他乐晕 *^_^*

Elsa 那时对于责任已认定不是她的车祸, 选择要照顾伤者, 而内心却是慌乱不已. 完全没有想像中哲学家 Elsa 自己说以前在夏令营走失时, 命名 " 勇敢 Elsa " 时的沉稳. Elsa 难道愈活愈回去了? 当然不是 *^_^*

我以为, 编剧并没有想要理想化 Elsa. 她或许从来就不是爱谈哲学的人. 她甚至可能根本没有命名什么星星叫 " 勇敢 Elsa ". 是她后来看到寺的徬惶, 无助, 激发出她人类潜在的 " 天使心 " *^_^*

人类潜在的 " 天使心 ", 才是化解流星戒指魔咒的活水源头 *^_^*

寺脱离危险期, 当 Elsa 拿捡到的戒指给他看的时候, 他几近发狂, 问她自己在那里, 自己是谁, 而且用力地抓伤了 Elsa 的右手臂... Elsa 开始明了寺失忆的严重性.

后来寺自医院出走. Elsa 开车在市区一直寻找到傍晚, 才找到在街头漫无目地游走的他. 又陪他走了一夜, 才一起走回了傻哥的葡萄酒庄. Elsa 当然查觉到他由于失忆之后的徬惶与无助.

我以为寺到达酒庄的第二天, 也就是在第三章, 这哲学家天使 Elsa, 才因寺的出现, 得以诞生 *^_^* " 阿星 " 也于第三章结尾时诞生 *^_^*

在注意到寺把自己关在房间里, 不进食, 也不说话, Elsa 终于开口, 第一次成为哲学家天使, 企图安慰寺...

" 我是谁? 我也常问自己这个问题... 这 ( 失忆 ) 或许是重新认识自己的好机会吧... "

我想, 若是碰到有人发生事情, 我们也想去安慰别人的时候, 说不一定话说的更多, 更哲学 *^_^*

我想, 寺是感受到 Elsa 话语的力量, 才慢慢地站起来, 环顾房间四周...

整个 " 流星花园 " 第二部, 最令我欣赏的一节的前半段...

当寺环顾 Elsa 的房间, 看到一幅着草绿旭衫的长发女子的背影风景画时, 一定觉得似曾相似, 内心震撼到用拳头打碎了穿衣镜里反影. Elsa 听到房里的异声, 寺却要她走开...

事实上, 我认为在寺失忆的这段时间中, 他的心底深处, 一直留有杉菜的身影与情绪. 不然他不会记得 " 原地 ", " 我的气球飞了 ", 也不会不由自主地后来爬高至屋顶, 一直等到晚上仰头望星星. 我相信他虽不记得以前的人, 事, 物, 可是不知为什么, 他记得内心留下的与杉菜那夜看流星的感动...

Elsa 只好也爬上屋顶看顾他... 当她以为他要从屋顶纵身跃下之时, 她叫住他, 第二次成为哲学家天使, 说了那个 " 勇敢 Elsa " 的故事. 为了引他进食, 只好又说 " 要来发现, 不要错过, 比如错过美好的食物... "

Elsa 真是非常地体贴. 杉菜也不过如此. 为了让他有自由的空间, 好好吃东西, 把自己与傻哥的盘子端开. 没想到他又不吃, 易感地跑回房间...

Elsa 只好拿着药箱, 借着替他擦药的名义, 来慢慢地开导他. 她只凶了这么一次... 叫他 " 听话! "... 当他本来不想放她进来之时. 她第三次成为哲学家天使, 说封闭与伤害自己, 都是没有用的. 要用科学的方法, 找出自己来自那里.

" 阿星 " 诞生日...

切... 在十一月中, 初听到这个名字之时, 我简直笑弯了腰...

" 阿流 " ( 这个名字比较好吗? )

" 阿星 " ( 如果我们不喜欢这个名字... )

" 阿花 " ( 好像李康宜小姐的角色, 较适用这个名字. )

" 阿园 " ( 想要用这个名字吗? )

傻哥带着他及 Elsa 参观葡萄园, 而后三人坐下品酒. 他有感而说, " 请不要叫我 ` 喂 `... 因为, 我曾经有过名字... " 哇... 多么的文艺痛!

当晚他又去看星星了... Elsa 给他一幅她画的他的背影, 以及...

" 头顶上有星星,
迷路的人找到了回家的方向!
心里有星星,
就不会忘记我是谁!
间隔一百二十万光年的距离,
" 阿星 " 与他的过去,
正搜寻着相互的感应. "

我想他是不讨厌 " 阿星 " 这个名字的. 因为... 他向她说了声 " 晚安 " *^_^* 他接受了她的关怀...

她还可能替他取其他的名字吗? 他真的已经给了她足够的提示了耶 *^_^* 足够的关于星星的提示.

第二章之后, 我一直在问自己, 非 Elsa 不行吗? 就算寺失忆, 非安排 Elsa 来做为寺与杉菜之间的桥不行吗? 为什么杉菜不能是在失忆的寺身边的那个女子? 当然可以! 杉菜当然可以! 只是徐熙媛小姐没有那么多档期 *^_^* 况且, 我个人认为, 杉菜不是陪伴在失忆的寺身边最好的人选.

因为, 我们必须要顾全, 以前是这样骄傲的一个男人, 自认为是全天底下最完美的一个男人的...

自尊

像这样的一个男人, 是无论如何不会忍受把自己的弱点 ( 失忆后, 心理层面的较无安全感, 徬惶, 无助; 与生活层面的较低能 ) 完全曝露于他所爱的女子面前, 那怕是因为失忆, 他事先不知情. 一旦他回忆起来了, 要他以后如何自处? 要他以后如何以一个男人的立场面对杉菜? 他曾经... 在她面前... 是如此的... 这个落差太大了! 如果永远回忆不起来, 那寺与杉菜全新的关系, 也就与以前的不同了.

我个人认为, 第一部的十九章, 加上第二部的三十一章, 总共五十章中, 没有任何一个角色, 比 Elsa 更适合来做为寺与杉菜之间的桥. 因为...

Elsa = ( 寺 + 杉菜 ) / 2

Elsa 从小生长在王公贵族之家. 她有贵族的教养, 与气质. 她也懂得贵族之家所有的责任义务, 与莫可奈何. 总括一句, 她懂得寺来自的环境.

Elsa 两年前, 为了自由, 离开自己的国家, 到处旅游, 吸取现实生活经验. 总括一句, 她较 F4 及小滋懂得杉菜来自的环境.

她不仅较懂得杉菜, 她的个性也与杉菜很像. 她与杉菜, 就是同时在公车上见义勇为, 想以拳头教训伸出色魔抓之人, 进而认识的. 后来又同在蛋糕店打工.

也就是说, Elsa 比我们大部份人喜欢的小滋, 更近似杉菜. 如果, 我们可以理解寺在第一部中, 为什么不喜欢我们大部份人喜欢的小滋; 那么, 我们就应当可以理解, 寺在第二部中, 为什么会喜欢上我们大部份人不喜欢的 Elsa *^_^*

事实上, 我认为寺会在失忆时喜欢上 Elsa, 除了 Elsa 是善良天使之外, 就是因为 Elsa 还同时拥有寺自己的气息, 与他所爱的杉菜的浓浓的气息 *^_^*

是否因为寺在第一部中, 不喜欢小滋, 所以, 大部份的我们, 才义无反顾地喜欢小滋? 是否因为寺在第二部中, 喜欢上 Elsa, 所以, 大部份的我们, 才义无反顾地不喜欢 Elsa? 纯粹冷笑话 *^_^*

阿美 ( 李康宜的角色 ) 当然也是可以做为寺与杉菜之间的桥的. 不过, 第一, 阿美人不在西班牙; 第二, 阿美是比杉菜还要远离寺的背景的人, 效果远比 Elsa 来得小. 而且, 我想寺在失忆时, 应该是不会喜欢上阿美的 ( 也就无法达到编剧们的企图 ), 因为阿美没有寺自己的气息.

Bugs:

1. 寺车祸后, 镜头带过在现场草丛里有一个手机, 想必就是寺的. 既然制作想到了要向观众交代手机的去向, 来解释任何人接不到杉菜打给寺电话及留言的原因, 那么...

寺是可以不带他的护照出去的. 而寺有可能不带皮夹 ( 内有信用卡, 现金... ) 去买流星戒指, 与租车吗? 信用卡就是另一种身份证明. 寺的皮夹呢?

第二章类在医院对杉菜说寺没有开车, 以至于放弃再深入调查开车受伤入院的亚裔男子是寺的可能性. 这里简直是一个致命的 bug. 我认为在这点上, 不是突显 F3 的无能, 而是突显制作上的无能! 制作在低估观众的智商! 如果制作硬是要杉菜与 F3 找不到寺, 至少要有牵强但没什么漏洞的理由.

事实上, 只要用数十秒的镜头, 交代寺在市区买了流星戒指与花之后, 是拦了一辆计程车, 或是坐小巴士游览车, 要去近郊的教堂向杉菜求婚. 而后计程车, 或小巴士抛锚, 寺为了赶时间, 才半路拦截借来小红车自己开车.

发生车祸之后, 在 Elsa 与寺去医院, 而交通警察还未来现场仔细搜证之前, 再可以用十秒的镜头, 交代寺的手机, 以及皮夹在翻出小红车, 跌至离车较远的草丛, 然后被两, 三个在附近玩耍的小朋友好奇的捡走. 而流星戒指就只落在车旁, 才轻易地当时就被 Elsa 发现.

2. 第二章, 杉菜白天在教堂等不到寺, 然后回旅馆房间继旭等寺. 后来门外有声音, 打开门看到的男子, 应该说西班牙文的晚安才是.

3. 第二章, 傻哥在葡萄酒庄, 接到 Elsa 电话时所穿的服装, 与立刻出发后来到达医院时所穿的服装明显不同.

4. 第二章, 道明寺的台湾护照 ( 与第四章 David Daumin 的美国护照 ) 上的生日是一九八零年六月十六日. 在第一部中, 寺与杉菜说他的生日在月底. " 流星雨道明寺篇 " 也是说他的生日在月底.

5. 第二章, 杉菜在医院, 只拿着寺的台湾护照上的凤梨头的小照片去讯问护士. F3 应该用寺的大张近照去问的. 或许 F3 深信寺没有开车这个 bug; 或许 F3 已深深地怀疑寺是被道明枫带走的.

6. 第二章, 美作在旅馆房间, 及医院所穿的黑底大白花衬衫, 中途与西门两人开车去车祸现场时, 却变成白底小黑花衬衫.

好样的:

1. 第二章, 杉菜坐在巴赛隆纳近郊教堂外的石阶上等寺时, 镜头摄到大树下刻有字的木椅. 第二天, 杉菜与静重回教堂, 念类的信时, 也有类在教堂等静时, 抚摸木椅上刻字的镜头.

最终章, 寺与杉菜重回教堂, 然后镜头转至木椅上的刻字 " 杉 & 寺 "... 不知道工作人员, 后来有没有把刻字处理掉. 如果没有, 我们以后还可去寻找这刻字呢.

2. 杉菜与静重回教堂, 念完类写给寺的信, 于日间景色的教堂, 打电话给被夜色包围的类. 台北时间正常是比巴赛隆纳早七个小时.

" 流星花园 " 第二部片头, 于 " 绝不能失去你 " 的乐声中, 寺, 美作, Elsa, 杉菜, 西门, 与类全白一字排开时, 阿旭的那个表情, 简直是棒极了! 好高兴观看第二部每一章时, 可以看到好几次阿旭的那个表情 *^_^* 心旷神怡!

待旭...

作者: youyouchihu 时间: 2004-7-2 12:59
其实就我而言，还是挺喜欢流二的。只是不会象流一似从头到尾一看再看，流二我只会挑几段来看。其实感觉编剧在每一处都想打造一个精典，却反而失之轻重，落了俗套。grace分析的超细的，虽然在宁论已经看过，但我印象中好像grace并没写完？？？是吗？顶上来把，催文，宁论又耍大牌，唉。

另，不知grace有没看过ko大的流星二<不变的牵引>，功力不凡啊!
http://www.yanchengxu.net/bbs/dispbbs.asp?boardID=9&ID=13248

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-7-3 08:28
对不起... 已开始写仍未写完的长帖愈来愈多... 继旭努力! 谢谢妳的推荐 *^_^*

七月四日是美国国庆, 请朋友们自己放...

http://www.inlibertyandfreedom.com/ilaf.htm

请以滑鼠在自由女神像上方漆黑的夜空的任何处按滑鼠键!

看看按得愈是多处, 按得速度愈快会如何呀 *^_^*

请记得把音箱打开呦!

作者: kikico 时间: 2004-7-3 11:58
grace,你对流一流二研究得真够仔细哈！
我不是很喜欢看流二，主要是不喜欢剧情和叶莎。
但我喜欢里面的一些镜头，喜欢美作的恋爱故事。
喜欢类对杉菜一如既往的无私帮助与支持。
更喜欢寺开心的笑容，但只是面对杉菜和F3时的哈。

再看流二时我有一点疑问，不知grace能否为我解答：
不知流二的结尾是否拍了两个版本？
因第一个版本遭到影迷强烈反对而临时开拍第二个版本？

当我在看现在这个结尾时，总觉得来得非常“陡”，和前一集接得不是很有说服力。
道明寺不是陪叶莎出去旅游了吗？
而且最后一集（或是二集，偶记不清了）叶莎都没有出现，以写给傻哥的一封信来交待她的去向。
道明寺的母亲大人的态度呢？她不管他儿子了吗？也突然消失了。
杉菜和寺最后一集中的见面也很古怪，看来似乎是类和F2安排的，
但交待得太潦草。
然后很久没见面也没交流的两人，会在这样的安排下立刻就恢复了以往的甜蜜吗？
要知道他们上次见面是以分手结束的呀。我有点晕眩了。
还有，最后一两集基本上没什么配乐，我经常都听到周围环境里的杂声，很不美哈。
是不是临时补拍的戏为了急于公映而匆匆制作的呀？

偶只看过流二一次，且过了很久了，有些细节因记忆不详而说得有误，见谅哈
等着grace来给我解惑哟！呵呵

[这个贴子最后由kikico在 2004/07/03 11:59:44 编辑]

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-7-3 13:20
Kikico,

谢谢妳的分享与问题.  或许我一个问题都回答不好, 然而我是真诚的 *^_^*  由于我在美国, " 流星花园 " 第二部于二零零二年十一月在台湾首播时我看不到, 却并没有天天自网上下载.  一方面是我希望一气呵成地欣赏, 另一方面是我不认为这样下载对于制作/演员是尊敬的事 ( 请谅解我自小就有些 " 奇怪 " 的想法与大部分的人不太一样 *^_^* )  宁可忍着不看阿旭的最新作品, 直到我可以在网上或在美国买到之时.  因此我观看 VCDs 时已是几个月之后的事.  并没有很注意也没有很大的兴趣注意那些在台湾首播时的诸多议论 *^_^*  一直只注意于我而言真有兴趣的事.  比如 F1 vs. F3 vs. 大S vs. 5566 vs. ...的议论, 我没有兴趣参予 *^_^*

我相信 " 流星花园 " 第二部的编剧们的确有良好的企图心.  然而他们轻忽了 " 市场调查 " 的重要性.  尤其是制作这么知名的一齣戏剧的续集之时.  他们与制作团队没有料想到 ( 或者说没有任何人事先料想到 ) 会得到那么负面的迴响.  与其说这齣戏本身虎头蛇尾, 不如说编剧/制作的心思被负面的迴响影响了以至于虎头蛇尾.

" 流星花园 " 第二部对于制作公司/编剧/导演/经纪公司/艺人/艺人迷/漫画迷... 而言, 都是一个很好的教训, 应该列入艺界宝典个案研究!  就是不到两年前的事, 所以这些当事人都还未写回忆录说出他们所知道的事实.  因此妳的问题的真实答案还未浮出檯面.  我所知道的不过都是猜测.  猜得再好都是猜测.  也就没有述说的价值 *^_^*

经过一个多月的议论, 观众会希望看到一个平顺的哪怕是一个俗套的结尾.  然而即如妳所说的 " 流星花园 " 第二部的结尾十分牵强.  那时... 编剧疲了... 演员累了... 制作疯了... *^_^*

于我而言只要保有想像力即不需任何人给我一个结尾... 一切尽在我心 *^_^*

作者: kikico 时间: 2004-7-4 13:20
grace，没能为我解惑，没什么呀。偶也只是问问而已。
不过，期待你把你“已开始写仍未写完的长帖”继续写完，
偶们喜欢看哟。

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-8-28 04:00
                                                                                                                              March 2, 2002

Dear Madam Producer,

How are you doing?  It`s a thrill to know that you're starting to shoot Part II of "The Meteor Garden"!  I heard that Ms. Youko Kamio has given you her consent to let your scriptwriters create more storylines under the same character names.  I couldn`t help presenting you with some of my premature ideas.  Please just bear with me here...

First of all, I would like to talk about Miss Hsu.  It`s amazing that she could somehow manage to lift only her right eyebrow in many of the emotional scenes!

She was a 25-year-old E-generation elite with at least three permanent body tattoos on her when she started playing Tsukushi Makino (Shan-Tsai) a year ago.  Nevertheless, I think her performance has given a soul to the name "Shan-Tsai"!

The audiences could clearly see her tattoos (from being Miss Hsu, instead of being Shan-Tsai) in Part I.  I`m just wondering why it was allowed to show the tattoos, which obviously were not characteristic at all for a naive and plain 20-year-old college girl, who we the audiences believed a virgin.  Personally, I think the tattoos should have been covered professionally.

Since Miss Hsu has defined Shan-Tsai so well, your scriptwriters can now define Shan-Tsai with some of the characteristics found in Miss Hsu, including her tattoos.  In Part II of the drama, I really would like to see a good explanation given to Shan-Tsai`s tattoos, if you`re still not covering them up.

For example, in order to echo her dear old friend Kazuya Aoike`s (Chen, Chin-Hur`s) remarks on her, she could have had the tattoos in high school to scare off some gang members to protect her classmates (to show us her courage and simplicity).  Or she might have had the tattoos with her boyfriend for her poppy love in high school (to show us her dedication and again, simplicity).

I think it`s smart if we take advantage of the disadvantages, and make them logically useful in the drama.

It`s a great scene that Shan-Tsai actually played the piano nicely, and at the same time recited an excellent and meaningful poem in Tsukasa Doumyouji`s (Dow-Ming-Sez`s) birthday party in front of his mom and all the guests.  Thus showed that Shan-Tsai`s a girl with culture and depth, even though she`s a commoner.

Shizuka Toudou (Miss Ton-Tuang Jean) and Miss Sheau-Sez (Dow-Ming-Sez`s two-time fiancee) should be able to play the piano as well as Shan-Tsai, or even much better.  Yet, I doubt if they have the wits to think of a meaningful poem in such a short time, and recite it perfectly to overcome embarrassment.

I wondered why there had not been any follow-up scenes to either explain Shan-Tsai`s music and poetry background, or to have F4 praise her for her profound quality under the "unattractive appearances and rudeness"...

Secondly, I would like to talk about Ken, who played Soujirou Nishikado (See-Men).  I personally think Ken might have had the most life experience than any of the other three actors, and thus makes him very special and attractive.  I was told that the story of Part II would start at the time when they just graduated from college.  I suggest defining the matured See-Men with the quality found in Ken.

I feel See-Men is the proudest among F4, who enjoys his supreme status and rich life style, and he will never give them up for anything else.  I heard that Ken thinks his set of teeth is the best part in him, which gives me an idea of a story line...

All of a sudden, See-Men is robbed, injured, and looses his wallet and cell phone of course, and is in the middle of nowhere in Taipei City.  A nurse volunteer to homeless camps and a group of homeless teenagers happen to be around.  They come to his rescue, and help him with his wounds, but no one believes that he is from the upper classes as he claims... except this young nurse, who always carries a toothbrush and brushes her teeth after each meal.

She falls for See-Men`s confidence and elegance, and she`s especially attracted by his smile with bright teeth.  She believes him in her heart, since her mom always tells her to take good care of her teeth, for a decent set of teeth shows a decent upbringing!

She eventually helps See-Men get back to his world, and then he finds out she is a love child of a business partner`s of his father`s!  She gave up the princess life just to be with her mom, who was abandoned by her father, and is now hospitalized.

During See-Men`s stay with this group of people, he observes the beautiful friendship among the under-privileged, which is no less than the friendship within the prestigious F4 at all!  He also learns the sufferings of the homeless, and realizes that there might be something he can do for them as soon as he takes over his father`s empire.

He asks the young nurse to come back to the society to work with him side-by-side for their beliefs and future together, but she says that she would rather continue working in the hospital, stay by her mom, and help out the homeless camps.  He then tells her that he`ll come back to look for her when he`s established, say in ten years...

Thirdly, I would like to talk about Vic, who played Rui Hanazawa (Hwa-Sze Lei).  I feel that Vic`s personality in real life is quite different than the one in Hwa-Sze Lei.  Thus makes his role the most challenging one among all five, and he did it gracefully in Part I!

Vic now looks healthier, much stronger and more electrified in his sparkling eyes :)))  Therefore, please define the matured Hwa-Sze Lei with the quality found in Vic.

I believe it will be good if you continue the story line from Part I to let Hwa-Sze Lei take the responsibility, and work hard to help save his father`s business after graduating from college in Part II.  But it still fails due to the recession.  He then becomes a commoner, just like Shan-Tsai.

If you`re going to let Dow-Ming-Sez killed in Part II as I`ve learned, please let Hwa-Sze Lei take a more initiative role to pursue his love for Shan-Tsai, since there should be no obstacles from his family, but only his affections left towards Ton-Tuang Jean.

Please also give some details on Hwa-Sze Lei`s childhood and his strange behaviors, and how he gradually walked out of the shadow with the help of Ton-Tuang Jean then.

Next, I would like to talk about Vanness.  He is a natural for the part Akira Mimasaka (Mei-Zuo) with his born-free characteristic.  Part I wouldn`t be so successful without Vanness`s Mei-Zuo, but no one else`s Mei-Zuo.  He is a precious sent from God, since he only gives us joy but not sorrow.  He probably is the only one among F4, who enjoys every minute of what he has been doing on screen.

Please do not stereotype him...  Please do not think that he is just another typical Chinese-American (or so-called ABC, America-Born-Chinese)...

He is the best there is!  I thank his parents (and all F4 parents) to raise him to be such a fine young man with humor, kindness, devotion, endurance and great teeth; and also thank them for giving Vanness the freedom to try out the things he wants to do, instead of telling him to go into engineering or business as typical Asian-American parents do.

Personally, I am even more impressed with his talent on singing than on dancing.  In Part II, he could be discovered by a recording company, and eventually becomes a great vocalist after he decides to give up his status, and pursue his love in singing...

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-8-28 04:02

Lastly, I would like to talk about Jerry.  He is a guy with "size" and sensibility!

In order to continue and hopefully top the romantic story lines and love scenes between Dow-Ming-Sez and Shan-Tsai, I would like to figure out one thing first...  What`s THE attractive thing about Jerry to most women?  As far as I`m concerned, it`s not the muscle under tight shirts, not the nose, not the shoulders, not the hands... but his

Adam`s apple :)))

Frankly speaking, he is extremely charming

when he smiles showing left dimple, with delicate lips
when he talks and sings with soft and gentle voices
when he walks with elegance and beauty
when he runs almighty

Yet, he only looks perfect with that Adam`s apple!

It`s like the final touch of drawing the eyes to finish the dragon.

I think he is the one among F4 with the most feminine characteristics under his perfect masculine body.  I personally think it might have something to do with his previous career as a professional model, which required his full attention to his overall looks all the time as most women do; and also the lost of his father when he was fairly young, and he became the man in the household to care for Mom and Sis.  All of these contribute to the rare charisma he possesses, which can only be found in the current mayor of Taipei City, Ma Ing-Jou, or the late US president JFK, for instance.

In Part II, a perfect love scene can be like...  Shan-Tsai asks Dow-Ming-Sez the question again why he likes her (just like the last time in Part I when they sat in his car parked under the bridge by the river, after they ran away from his birthday party), and he says this time that he is attracted by her right eyebrow :))) since it lifts up when she gets angry at him after he calls her "You stupid woman!".  Then he starts to kiss her from the eyebrows, and naturally, her lips touch his Adam`s apple... and she murmurs... she likes his Adam`s apple :))) for it enables his calling to her, "You stupid woman!"

We the audiences can tell that "You stupid woman!" is actually a love call to Shan-Tsai from Dow-Ming-Sez.  Yet, I like to hear lesser and lesser of it and other impolite languages such as "Wan-Baa-Dan" & "Pee" in Part II.  They should have all matured, and there is no need to use these words in their lines to characterize them any longer!

If you really plan to let Dow-Ming-Sez killed In Part II, please have him die for a good cause!  It`s a great story line to end the life of the leader of F4 violently, only if it`s for the purpose of anti-violence!

He could die to end a violent attack, and rescue the guy who he almost killed when he was 18 (the story was seen in the special episodes of "F4 Meteor Rain").  Or he could die in order to save a life (of a little boy, for example) in a terrorist attack to his parents` cooperations.  In the end, let Shan-Tsai realize that she is carrying Dow-Ming-Sez`s baby, and have Hwa-Sze Lei watch over them at a distance as he promises...

I am picturing an ending for the final chapter...  In the fall of 2012 (ten years from now), a big charity concert sponsored by the See-Men Corporation for the under-privileged is about to begin in a few hours.  Posters all around the concert dome show that Mei-Zuo (who pursues his dream in singing, now an international superstar) is the special guest of the show.  A big clock in the dome shows it`s 2:44pm.

The wall clock shows 2:44pm in a big conference room inside the headquarter skyscraper of See-Men Corporation.  Shan-Tsai (who pursues a normal life, now a career woman works for See-Men as an accounting manager) is finishing up her presentation to the Board members...

See-Men (who pursues success in business world, now the CEO of See-Men Corporation) walks to her with a smile and says, "Great job as always!  No wonder my father jokes about asking you to marry me all the time...  Our company just can`t afford to let you go someday."

Shan-Tsai says, "Thank you, boss!  May I have the rest of the afternoon off, then?"

See-Men starts to look serious and says, "Surely.  It`s his tenth anniversary, right?  How time flies..."

He pauses for a moment and continues, "If they could have imagined your talent and success today, Dow-Ming-Sez`s family would never have rejected you, and he probably would have been alive today...  Remember tonight`s concert?  Please come to the back stage first."

The wall clock shows 3:14pm in a musical instrument store, and Hwa-Sze Lei (who pursues his love for Shan-Tsai, now the owner of the store) makes a call, and talks over the phone, "Are you done with your meeting?  How did it go?  Did you have lunch already?  Are you going to pick him up from school?  I have bought the flowers...  I`ll meet you two there in an hour."  (They`re heading to Dow-Ming-Sez`s forever-resting-place before going to the concert.)

The wall clock shows 3:44pm in See-Men`s office.  See-Men talks to his secretary over the intercom, and says that he`s leaving the office for the day, and he will arrive at the concert dome by 6:00pm.

He then drives to a hospital by himself.  He asks around... and eventually he finds the nurse, who he met ten years ago...

He tells her that he now dares to ask her out with a marriage proposal in mind, since he has been gaining the recognition from his family by working very hard for the past ten years, and he does not need to marry a wealthy heiress to succeed.

He asks her to come to the concert with him, and he mentions to her in the car that long time ago a dear friend of his had shown him to pursue his true love no matter what (at this time we the audiences see some clips from the scenes between Dow-Ming-Sez & Shan-Tsai).

The wall clock in the back stage of the concert dome shows 5:44pm.  Shan-Tsai and a ten-year old boy arrive at the concert dome by the company of Hwa-Sze Lei, and they enter the back stage to greet Mei-Zuo, and then See-Men comes in with the nurse.

Hwa-Sze Lei, Mei-Zuo, and See-Men all watch the boy playing musical instruments happily with Shan-Tsai...  One by one they talk to the Dow-Ming-Sez in their hearts, "Dear Ar-Sez, I hope you would be proud of what I am today...  You had given me the inspiration to pursue my dream, and be responsible for my own life!"  In addition, Hwa-Sze Lei mumbles, "I`m going to ask Shan-Tsai to marry me...  Dearest Ar-Sez, please give us your blessings."

Shan-Tsai is looking at the boy and says, "He could be the new member of F4!"  Then, we the audiences, both in the concert and by TV, see the "image" of the forever-young Dow-Ming-Sez (he`s the only one in his early 20`s, and all the others need to look older to be in their 30`s) appears on stage while See-Men gives the opening speech for the concert, "We`re gathering here today to raise money for...  Most of all, we are here in memory of a dear friend, who sacrificed his life to stop a violent crime exactly ten years ago today..."

For the final ending scene, thirty-something Hwa-Sze Lei, Mei-Zuo, See-Men, and the image of the twenty-something Dow-Ming-Sez are singing their song "Meteor Rain" (or "D-E-Sher-Gen", or their new songs in their second album) as forever F4 on the stage...

Taiwan will definitely become a more beautiful new world ten years from now, when we have been filling the gap between the rich and the poor with love and understanding!

Finally, I would like to thank you for bringing this Japanese comic to life, and giving us five brilliant young people, who are as shining as the meteor rain!  I am very proud and excited that at last there has been an idol drama made in Taiwan which storms the entire Asia!  It is the beginning of the era of F4, and I truly hope "F4" will become a gold brand name for Taiwan, just like "Acer" in PC industry.  I have only known F4 for a number of weeks, yet I can tell they will someday become the greatest idol (group) in Asia, if they stick together well as dearest friends to COMPLEMENT one another with individual strength and talent.  On the other hand, I hope they will eventually find the long-term goals of their lives as individuals with all the resources they gain as F4.

We can imagine they must be under tremendous pressure right now, since all the women in Asia would like to get a piece of F4 :)))  How I wish they could have had some peace and space they desperately need and deserve...

I personally feel that each one of them, Jerry, Ken, Vanness and Vic is now in an uncharted waters, where there`s no one to lead them the best but the compasses in their hearts...  I believe in them, and I know they will eventually walk out of this chaos, partially hurt perhaps, but they`ll know what to do to be responsible for their lives.  I have the confidence that you will guide them along the way as always to help them have a normal family life and career behind and after the stage.

Wish you the best of luck and take care!

P.S. I have to apologize...  I simply couldn`t write this letter in Chinese, since I never had to learn how to key in characters.

Many Thanks & Best Regards,
Grace

作者: 薔薇ぺ惠惠 时间: 2004-8-28 18:08
看了小猪的故事很感动~可后面这个全英文的~我就比较汗啦~呵呵~

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-8-29 07:43
很不好意思啊, 薔薇ぺ惠惠. " 全英文 " 或許就是 " 流星花園 " 的製作完全不理會我這封信的原因 *^_^* 那時我不會中文打字. 數月後有朋友替我翻成中文. 只是沒有經過許可我不會轉貼 *^_^*

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-9-12 01:04
" 七重天九层云我的私心 " ( 二零零三年九月 ) 之一段...

" 是的!  以前也是希望阿旭有一天在全世界大放异彩, 因此梦想...

Jerrytionary - F
footprint
I imagine that he would someday be honored by placing his handprints, footprints, and signature in wet cement at Grauman`s Chinese Theater in Hollywood :)))

阿旭愈来愈赞, 我却回归基本 (back to the basics ^-^).

个人主观地以为, 在二十一世纪中, 阿旭已不需非要在非中文的世界中出人头地之后, 才叫实力被真正地肯定 ^-^  我自私地甚至不希望他去日本发展 ^-^

与其辛辛苦苦地把英文, 日文 " 真真正正地 " 学好, 拼上命地进攻非中文世界, 我主观地希望阿旭不如集中精神, 钻研演技, 舞蹈, 唱功, 篮球, 养牛, 挤奶...

台湾, 内地, 香港... 加上... 再加上其他世界中的华裔, 总共有多少华人人口呀?  其他世界还剩下多少人口?  我自私地希望, 阿旭在这么广大的华人市场中, 快乐地用他比较熟知的语言, 享受他的演艺事业, 与人生!

虽然艺术是国际语言, 但是, 艺术表现的方式, 绝对是会因语言隔阂而感受不同!

我大胆地假设... 如果阿旭欣赏一部美国电影, 是一句一句先看中文字幕, 再一遍一遍看表演的话, 再经典的制作, 都不如他可以全神贯注地... 可以与对白同步地... 欣赏一部优良的中文片中的经典表演要来的收获多多 ^-^

先不谈因文化, 价值观... 等不同而产生理解上的不同...  西方电影在一般东方观众的心目中, 到底是视为欣赏艺术的成分为重, 还是追求时尚流行 (fashion) 的成分为重, 大约只有每一位观众自己才最明白 ^-^

阿旭是一位朴实的艺术工作者!  他观看不同国家的作品, 因此他会找出什么对他的帮助最有效, 最实际, 而不是现在最流行什么...  因为他根本不崇尚名牌 ^-^

阿旭在观赏电影时, 除了与大部分的我们一样是 " 观众 " 之外, 他同时还具备 " 演员 ", " 舞者 ", 以及 " 歌手 " 的身分.

有一些美国当红的电影很不错, 值得阿旭以观众的身分去欣赏, 去喜欢.  可是, 或许并不一定适合阿旭以演员, 舞者, 以及歌手的身分, 拿来做表演方面的教科书 ^-^

这就好比... 阿旭是名模出身, 他一定了解... 有一些美国热门的服装杂誌里穿在模特儿身上的流行服饰, 或许并不一定适合穿在自己身上.

因为, 无论阿旭的外型有多么的国际化, 他清楚自己的特色, 与文化!

除了成龙, 李连杰之外, 像与阿旭未来发展的型比较近似的周润发先生, 以一非武功高强的华裔艺人, 在好莱坞拍主流电影, 出人头地, 非常令人佩服!  然而, 周先生与茱蒂福斯特在一九九九年拍 " 安娜与国王 " 之时, 已近四十五岁之龄...

周先生近四十岁之时, 为了真正学好美式英语, 曾经将筷子横地放在嘴里学卷舌...  学到做恶梦...

周先生已拥有很多人生宝贵的东西, 可是造化弄人...  他也失去一些很宝贵的东西...  他有一位绝顶贤慧, 语言天才的妻子, 专职地替他打点一切...  他们迄今无子女...

阿旭比这三位前辈年轻十几二十岁.  很庆幸阿旭的这一代亚洲艺人, 已不必像前辈们需要以得到欧美人士的肯定, 来做为他们达到演艺事业最高峰的一个表征.

事实上, 我们都知道...

圣母峰在亚洲, 不在欧美 ^-^ "

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-9-19 01:55
M

ma (short for mamma)
machine
Imagine he`s naturally being lulled to sleep as a child by the steady and gentle sounds from Liao-Ma-Ma`s sewing machine.

Macapagal
Malacanang
Manila
metro
He paid a courtesy call to Her Excellency Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo, President of the Republic of the Philippines, in the Malacanang Palace in Metro Manila on November the 6th, 2003, and he`s treated with warm hospitality as if he were a royalty *^_^*

mad
madhouse
March
me
my
I have been as mad as a March hare about him *^_^* Would you ladies like to join me in my madhouse - Jerrytionary?

Madame
mamma
mother
As a sign of respect, we would like to address his mother Liao Mamma as Madame Liao.

Madonna
His heart is as pure as the Madonna lily.

magazine
major
He has been featured in major magazines all over Asia.

Maggie
magnificent
Miss
montage
mood
motion
movement
He would like to work with Miss Maggie Cheung, the magnificent actress who starred in a superb motion picture presented with interesting movement and special montage in 2000, "In the Mood for Love".

magic
magnet
majesty
more
movie
His very first movie "Magic Kitchen" will surely become a magnet to attract the general public to get to know more about his talents and majesty *^_^*

magnate
magnitude
majestic
media
Mr. Peter Lin of Media Asia Films is a majestic magnate with magnitude-9 perspectives, and hopefully he would invite Jerry to work on other projects.

mah-jongg
He`s sometimes seen playing imaginary mah-jongg with colleagues.

maidenly
He turned his eyes maidenly away from the audience.

mail
He`s been keeping all the mails sent by fans, and reviewed them frequently.

maintain
The improvement in his health is being maintained.

main
might
He has been working on his first solo album with might and main.

maintenance
He has becoming a superstar yet with low maintenance.

majority
male
The majority of his fans are females rather than males.

make
Let the people see what he is made of!

making
He has in him the makings of a fine actor.

malice
He bears malice towards no one; therefore, his fans should be the same.

malicious
Eventually all the malicious remarks about him would be gone with the wind.

man
He has great potential to become a family man *^_^*

manage
He managed to finish the performance in poor health condition.

management
What more could we say about the management team in Fu Long?

mandarin
He has a pair of "mandarin duck hotpots" on his cheeks *^_^*

mango
As a famous fruit-lover, he seems to like mangoes as well.

mania
maniac
As a maniac in Jerry-mania, I`m having a hard time preserving my sanity *^_^*

manifest
His goodness is manifest to us.

manikin
I bet Jerry-figured manikin would be a hot seller *^_^*

manipulate
Truly hope that he wouldn`t be manipulated by the agency.

mansion
He wouldn`t want to possess a house with empty rooms and corners like the Werribee Park mansion, where Thomas Chirnside prisoned his love for years.

manner
manor
His exquisite quality can only be denoted as "to the manner (manor) born" patrician.

manuscript
many
must
He must have received many manuscripts made for movies and TV dramas.

map
He has surely helped putting Taiwan on the map.

Marathon
We chose to enter this Marathon with him willingly.

marble
His silky marble skin shines...

march
May
month
Do you think we can finally taste the sweetness of the birth of his solo album by next summer if it shows a timely march in the coming months of March, April, and May?

margin
He is winning by a wide margin with the great efforts from his die-hard fans.

marine
He`s wearing a pair of marine camouflage BDU (battle dress uniform) pants in the movie poster.

mark
His birthday is just around the corner... I`m wondering if he has any birth-marks on his body *^_^*

market
Personally, I think China should be his number one target market.

marriage
He looks for good relationships with marriage in mind.

marry
He would someday marry for love.

marvel
We marvel at his simplicity!

masculine
What`s so masculine about him? His 40D chest *^_^*

master
He has been mastering his temper.

mate
He stars in the movie as a chef`s "mate" (an `assistant` and then the `spouse`).

matter
It hardly matters to me how popular he has become.

mature
I`m sure he will make an excellent decision on his contract after mature deliberation.

meagre
His meagre face indicated that he`d been working very hard.

meal
Breakfast, the first meal of the day, is extremely important to his health, especially in such a busy working schedule.

mean
He certainly knows that the Latin word "amo" means "I love".

measly
Jerrytionary - M is just a measly birthday present to Jerry *^_^*

measure
Words simply couldn`t give the measure of our feelings towards him.

meat
Instead of a vegetarian, he is definitely a meat eater, since he loves steaks *^_^*

medicine
It`s better for him to look for a board-certified internal medicine physician to be his family doctor as some fans have suggested.

medium
stick to a happy medium
How I wish that he could just stick to a happy medium *^_^*

meet
He meets obstacles with perseverance.

meeting
He tends to be shy at a first meeting.

mellifluous
melody
His voice sounds like a mellifluous melody!

melt
He melted into tears...

member
We function as absolutely equal members in Jerry`s extended family!

memoir
I think it`s not possible for him to consider doing a second photo book in the near future, yet maybe a memoir in a quarter of a century...

memory
He has a great memory for faces *^_^*

mentor
He is truly a mentor for the younger generation.

mental
mentality
I believe he is a person of average mentality, yet with great mental strength!

mercenary
He does not work for the mercenary lifestyle.

mercy
He is thankful for mercies.

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-9-19 01:56
merit
He never makes a merit of being punctual, or being hardworking.

merry
Does he like to ride on a merry-go-round in the amusement park?

meteor
monumental
His first drama as a leading man, "Meteor Garden" is a monumental production.

method
There is method in his sensibility.

meticulous
I`m sure he is meticulous in cleaning his clothes *^_^*

mettle
He was put on his mettle.

microphone
murmur
He was murmuring into the microphone attached to the cell phone...

midnight
He`d been burning the midnight oil in company with many fans while shooting the movie at Hong Kong in October 2003.

mien
mild
With a pleasant mien and a mild attitude, he is welcome everywhere.

milestone
He hits a milestone in his acting career in 2003!

milk
His fans know it very well that he`s a man who has the milk of human kindness, and they have been doing great charity works to honor his name. For they understand that kindness does nourish the soul from one to another as the milk from a mother nourishes her infant.

millennium
He is becoming a superstar in Asia in this new millennium.

mimic
He mimicked other people`s voices cleverly.

mind
He`s made up his mind to take care of the family.

mineral
He drinks a great deal of mineral water.

miniature
Pepsi manufactured some miniature double decker buses showing his "ask for more" pictures.

minute
Some friends in NBBBS have given us minute descriptions on their encounters with Jerry.

miracle
miraculous
Humans can`t do miracles, yet miraculously he`s been touching the lives of thousands of people who got to know him.

mirage
mortgage
He seems as imaginary as a mirage, yet he`s as real as a mortgage to me *^_^* Therefore, Jerrytionary ?M is also considered as one of the many mortgage payments I owe.

mirror
I believe that how we see him and other fellow fans in every aspect of life reflects how we see ourselves in the mirror *^_^*

miscast
Hope he would never be miscast.

mischievous
He was as mischievous as the dog Louis at the Brunswick Bookstore *^_^*

misinform
I hope he would never be misinformed by his agents.

mislead
Some information about him can be misleading.

mist
His true color would not be lost in the mists of time.

mistake
He has been mistaken for F2 a few times.

mobile
Anyone know the telephone number of his mobile phone... *^_^*

model
Many of Jerry`s lady fans model themselves after his mother, Madame Liao.

modesty
His modesty prevented him from making his feelings known to her.

moisten
He tends to moisten his lips by licking them from time to time.

moment
He`ll be here at any moment...

momentum
He is recharged with full momentum.

Monday
He finally showed up at CKS International Airport in Taoyuan, Taiwan on early Monday morning, July the 7th, 2003, and took a flight to Hong Kong after a departure from the spotlight for exactly 120 days.

money
He`s been learning from his mother the beauty of simplicity, and what money can`t buy.

monogamy
He must believe in monogamy.

moon
He didn`t promise her the moon, even though he`s moon-struck *^_^*

morally
Morally he is all that could be desired.

moss
"A rolling stone gathers no moss"... That`s why I stay at Jerry`s Harbor *^_^*

most
He is most polite to others.

mountain
The sound waves from cheering for him were mountain high.

mouth
He knows very well that a good actor doesn`t mouth his words.

move
misfortune
Hope he could forget some of the misfortunes and move on.

much
Jerry does not so much differentiate his fans as unite them.

mud
He never flung mud at his co-stars.

muffle
He muffled his throat very well.

muffler
He likes to wear mufflers while traveling in different climates.

mule
He is as obstinate as a mule.

multiple
He is a man with multiple interests in performing arts.

murder
Nothing could justify Jerry`s stunning pose on that new bench/ poster... it was sheerly "warm"-blooded murder *^_^*

murderous
He stunned us with his murderous smiles.

muse
He was musing over memories of the past.

mushroom
The mushroom growth of his fan clubs is unbelievable!

music
face the music
He faces the music with grace.

musical
His favorite musical instrument is piano.

must
His photo book is a must for fans.

mute
She was starring at him in mute amazement.

mutton
Did he try the freshest Sinkiang roast mutton, or camel meat when he visited Kishi in July 2003?

mutual
mystery
Let us build up mutual respect and understanding with other fellow fans.

myth
He`s no longer a myth; he`s becoming a legend!

mythology
Jerry mythology deserves to be researched by scholars.

作者: zoe 时间: 2004-9-19 14:16
Grace,这就是上次那个旭迷提到的你花了两年时间编写的英文词典吗？

你真是太棒了，简直无法用语言形容对你的这种佩服，旭有你这样的爱护真是他的福气，欢迎你继旭.....

作者: 000000000000 时间: 2004-9-19 23:16
notafanyet 实在太厉害了,只有佩服的份了.
旭有你这样的影迷真是他的福份,坤有你这样的影迷也应该是他的幸运.我真的希望什么时候能看到你的下一部词典----比这个还要赞的赞坤词典~~~~~~

[这个贴子最后由000000000000在 2004/09/19 23:21:49 编辑]

作者: kikico 时间: 2004-9-20 20:24
Grace,佩服你。
若不是ZOE点出，我还真不知道这是你给旭编的英文词典呢!
只有M开始的么？

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-10-7 05:33
谢谢朋友们! 我是从 A 开始写现在写完 M 啦, Kikico. 再贴 C 与 K 好了.

caliber
He is a man of caliber.

calligraphy
We find his calligraphy interesting.

campaign
I personally would like to see him attend a campaign to raise funds for a good cause.

candid
He is always candid with the interviewers.

canon
He knows the canons of conduct as a performing artist very well.

capability
He has excellent capabilities in acting!

capacity
He has more capacity for happiness than most people.

capital
The place he visited to shoot the photos for the book, Melbourne, is the capital of Victoria.

captivate
We are captivated with his mind.

casino
Many friends like the set of photos taken in the casino in his photo book.

castaway
He would be the perfect companion for any castaway who is stranded in a no-man island.

celebrity
He is becoming a celebrity with or without his consent.

ceremony
We officially crowned him king after the Golden Music Award ceremony in Taiwan.

champion
He is our champion!

characterize
His work is characterized by paying attention to detail.

charcoal
He looks very nice in charcoal gray.

charity
He knows exactly what "charity begins at home" means.

charm (n.)
We fall victims to his charm.

charm (v.)
His brains charm more than his beauty!

charmed (adj.)
Wishing him a charmed life!

chaste
The Dow-Ming-Sez he portrayed in "Meteor Garden" was wealthy, and yet chaste.

cheering
The cheering for him in all his signature parties could be heard miles away.

cherish
We would cherish his goodness for the rest of our lives.

cherry
Many people are fascinated by his cherry lips on the photo on page 158, which is one of his favorites in his photo book.

cherub
Could we imagine him as a cherub when he was a child?

chic
He has the magic to turn anything ordinary on him into chic!

chivalry
His sense of honor and morality reminds me of chivalry in the Middle Ages.

chore
We watched him happily helping the chores in Lal Lal Estate.

chronicle
We are planning to make a chronicle of his career.

chuckle
He was chuckling over what he was reading in the Brunswick Bookstore.

chum
He has chummed up with Vic, Ken, and Vanness.

cinema
I am sure he is interested in the cinema art.

circumstance
He never lost himself in straitened circumstances!

civilization
He stunned civilization :)))

clairvoyance
He is dull sometimes, and yet once in a while he surprises us with his exceptional clairvoyance!

clandestinely
Will he get married clandestinely someday?

clean
He is clean-shaven.

cleanse
The purity of his voice cleanses our souls.

clemency
His clemency moves our hearts as gentle breeze.

climax
His arrival brought a climax to the evening`s entertainment.

clinging
They always had him wear clinging garments when he played Dow-Ming-Sez in "Meteor Garden".

closure
Finally, his tough days in Barcelona have come to a closure.

cobber
Did he know that they call comrades "cobbers" in Melbourne?

coeternal
Vic, Ken, Jerry, and Vanness are coeternal!

coincide
Jerry and F3 did not leave Barcelona together because his schedule did not coincide with theirs.

collaborate
I would like to see him collaborate a book with F3.

colleague
He gets along very well with his colleagues in Comic.

colloquial
He is cute when he accidentally pops out some colloquial Taiwanese.

coma
The Dow-Ming-Sez he portrays in Part II of "Meteor Garden" is in a coma after an accident.

comedy
Some people would like to see him in a comedy in the near future.

comet
Instead of referring him as a shooting star, I prefer to refer him as a comet, which moves round the sun in an eccentric orbit.

comic
There is no need to explain "comic" here, since each and everyone of us gives a definition to comic under her/his own impression :)))
"Meteor Garden" is adapted from a well-known Japanese comic strips story.

comity
We should create "the comity of supporters of F4`s" based on the comity of nations.

commend
His work is highly commended.

commensurate
Is the pay he receives commensurate with the work he does?

commentary
The media kept up a running commentary on him.

commiserate
He commiserates with people for their misfortunes.

commit
He has committed himself to support his family.

commoner
It seems that F4 in Part II of "Meteor Garden" would lose everything they have and then become commoners.

commotion
The appearance of his usually causes some commotion.

commune
He likes to commune with close friends.

communicable
The spirit of his cold jokes is surprisingly communicable to the supporters.

communion
He sometimes prefers to hold communion with himself.

companionship
He enjoys F3`s companionship dearly!

compass
He was gradually walking out of the turbulence led by the compass in his heart.

compassion
He is filled with compassion for the sufferers through his own life experience.

compatible
He knows to drive his motorcycle at a speed compatible with safety.

competent
He is fully competent for his work.

competitor
I personally think that he treats F3 as comrades rather than competitors.

compile
I would definitely compile the Jerrytionary from A to Z and send a copy to him, if I get to live till the day of the completion :)))

complement
I personally think that each and every one of F4, that is Vic, Ken, Jerry, and Vanness is fortunate enough to have three dearest friends to work together, and complement one another with individual talent and strength.

complexion
He has a fairly dark yet good complexion!

compliance
He always tries his best to be in compliance with directors` suggestions.

complication
Hope there`re no complications set in by his toothache.

compliment
Our compliments to his family!

composure
He behaves with composure in interviews.

comprehension
The hardship borne by him during fall/winter of last year was above and beyond our comprehension.

compromise
We truly hope that his position would never be compromised by Comic`s judgment.

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-10-7 05:35
concentration
He is a man with great power of concentration.

concern
We are all concerned for his health.

concert
Many people look forward to meeting him in person in the concert tour.

confidence
He has below-average self-confidence as a 25-year-old man, and yet he has much stronger will power to accomplish what he believes compared to a regular 25-year-old; he has been around people who don`t think he is smart, and yet he is intelligent enough to know what he really wants in life!

confirm
It`s confirmed that he`s already back to Taiwan from Barcelona.

Confucius
He believes in Confucius.

congratulation
We offered him our congratulations upon the success of his photo book.

conscience
He has a clear conscience.

consciousness
The accident would cause the Dow-Ming-Sez he plays in Part II of "Meteor Garden" to lose consciousness for a while.

consensus
We reach a consensus that he is our first and foremost concern!

conservative
He is rather conservative in pursuing his mate.

consideration
He is giving his career careful consideration.

consistent
What he practices is consistent with what he says.

constellation
He would be the brightest star among all constellations in the Meteor Universe.

contagious
His hardworking is contagious :)))

contribute
His existence contributes to the better understanding among all Asian communities.

convertible
I would suggest F4 to come to California again for their next vacation, and rent a 4-seated convertible to drive along Highway 1 between San Francisco and Los Angeles.

cordial
His cordial smile with a handshake is worth waiting for a lifetime.

costume
Wonder how he would look like wearing historical costume.

courage
He has the courage of his convictions.

courteous
He is courteous to interviewers.

coverage
His supporters put together all of his television coverage into VCDs.

creation
He is a rare creation of art!

criterion
He knows very well that success in money-making is not necessarily a good criterion of real success in life.

critic
He is his own most severe critic.

crocodile
He is so sincere that he would never look at people in crocodile tears.

cryptic
He sometimes pops out cryptic remarks.

cue
He takes his cues from directors and co-stars very well.

cultivate
Hopefully, Comic would continue to cultivate him (F4) with long-term plans.

culture
He knows that physical culture is important, and yet he must not neglect the culture of the mind.

curiosity
He is with curiosity to learn about distant lands.

curl
Does his hair curl naturally?

cynosure
He is our Cynosure!

kaleidoscope
He is actually a kaleidoscope of landscape.

keen
He is very keen to get together with his old friends from time to time.

keeping
His actions are in keeping with his promises.

key
He is the key man in F4.

khaki
He looks very nice in a pair of khaki jeans with that white sleeveless T-shirt with his face printed on it.

kick
I feel that he gets a great deal of kick out of singing and dancing.

kid
He`s looking at you, kid!

kill
He`s softly killing us with his smiles...

kin
Jerry, Ken, Vic, and Vanness are very close to one another as nearest kin.

kind
He repays supporters` warmth in kind.

kindle
His eyes kindled with affection.

king
Please allow me to say this... He is our king!

kingdom
Thy Kingdom comes, Jerry!

kiss
He kissed away her tears...

kite
In a way, he`s like a kite flying in the unpredictable sky with a reel of thread connected to us supporters.

knee
We go down our knees to pray for his health and happiness.

knightly
Sir Jerry has many knightly qualities!

knock
It seems that he was not knocked up after a 26-hour flight from NYC to Singapore in February 2003.

knot
I hope he didn`t get into knots about the recent news.

know
He knew poverty and sorrow in his early life.

knowingly
He would never knowingly do anything to hurt supporters` feelings.

knowledge
To the best of my knowledge, his knowledge of English is fair.

knuckle
He never knuckles under the temptation.

koala
He must have seen many koalas, the Australian tree-climbing mammals that look like bears, in his trip to Melbourne, Australia in March 2002.

kris
Kris is a Malay dagger with a wavy blade, which can be found easily in Singapore and Malaysia, where he is holding the last three concerts.

Kuala Lumpur
He is going to have the very last concert of the very first world tour in Kuala Lumpur, the capital of Malaysia on Valentine`s Day, 2003!

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2004-12-7 13:08
Dear Kikico, 记得这主题帖子吗 *^_^*

作者: 汀汀小慧 时间: 2004-12-7 14:50
哇~~~我没太看懂诶。。。

作者: Marilyn 时间: 2004-12-8 20:33
Ha! What a cool idea! We should make an Aloysionary as well! hahahaha!

作者: kikico 时间: 2004-12-9 01:47
记得呀！Grace!
先是讲一只可爱的小猪。
后来是给你亲爱的旭编写英文词典呀！
而且，我们还讨论过流星花园呢！
嘿嘿。
我不会忘的！

[这个贴子最后由kikico在 2004/12/09 01:48:42 编辑]

作者: ttxxf 时间: 2004-12-9 10:10
又"读"繭,..感动依然!...

也谢谢Jjmm!

作者: kikico 时间: 2004-12-10 00:15
呵呵，可爱小猪猪！！！

作者: 美丽豆沙 时间: 2004-12-15 19:21
狂佩服楼主的英文水平，我决定你就是我的发展方向，偶现在的英文水平，汗！！～～～～～～～～～～：（

作者: kikico 时间: 2004-12-16 02:29
希望GRACE继续英文词典!
我们也好一起学习哈!

作者: 坤MM 时间: 2004-12-16 10:44
这么长~~~晕~~~楼主好功力~~~先顶再看

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2005-5-17 07:09
为祝贺飞毛腿毛毛与 Kikico, 偶来贴两旧英文短帖 *^_^*

"道明寺与杉菜的贞节"
Dow-Ming-Sez & Shan-Tsai's Chastity
originally posted on Tuesday, April the 2nd, 2002

The thing impresses me the most in "Meteor Garden" is how highly both Dow-Ming-Sez and Shan-Tsai value their virginity.

In the beginning of chapter 2, Shan-Tsai roared to Dow-Ming-Sez on the campus lawn,

"I never had any abortions! I am still a virgin!"

After she'd had the wrong impression that the graffiti on the blackboard of her classroom had been done by Dow-Ming-Sez's men.

This was the time we the audiences and Dow-Ming-Sez got to know about it, and we all believed it (or I should say we all believed her) instantly. Especially for Dow-Ming-Sez, it seemed to be a very precious message...

We the audiences had a feeling back then that this might be a hint to a major storyline, for they seldom make clear about this point in any love stories nowadays; and also we don't care much about it, regardless if the heroines are in high-school, college, or out in the workplace; i.e., if they are in their teens, 20's or 30's...

Then in the middle of chapter 3, after See-Men and a lady companion, Mei-Zuo, Bi-Hur and Chien-Whei had all been awaken by Dow-Ming-Sez in the middle of the night, and came out of their cabins in their pajamas to the deck of the cruise ship, only to find that heDow-Ming-Sez was doing nothing but making sashimi of the fish he and Chin-Hur had caught...

Mei-Zuo looked surprised, "You should have had other things to do (on a night like this)..."

Then See-Men teased, "That's why I hate virgins (referring to Dow-Ming-Sez, since he didn't have any other things to do)..."

Dow-Ming-Sez looked embarrassed, "How could I have been with women I don't like..."

That's the moment we the audiences and Shan-Tsai got to know about it for the first time, but it seemed that Bi-Hur and Chien-Whei cared more about the news than Shan-Tsai did at that time, for her mind was preoccupied by the scene she had happened to see between Hwa-Sze Lei and Ton-Tuang Jean by Ton-Tuang Jean's cabin moments ago.

At that point in time, we the audiences were definitely aware of the importance of this issue in the drama!

I could only talk about how the scriptwriters and the director have portrayed in the drama "Meteor Garden", for I never read the original comic books, and I had no idea how Ms. Youko Kamio set up the storyline on this issue since she first started the comics in 1992.

It might be common for a girl in her junior year in high school (or junior year in college in the drama) to be chaste; but I find it unusual for a wealthy heir as Dow-Ming-Sez with all the temptations around him, but still has the determination to save himself for the girl he really loves, especially if he has been around with close friends like playboy See-Men and Mei-Zuo. I know as a fact that some parents in the upper class even contract nice college girls to "be" with their sons exclusively... How could we not appreciate Dow-Ming-Sez's "sense" on this issue?

With the progress of the drama, we watched Dow-Ming-Sez cried with broken heart standing on the floor above, looking at Shan-Tsai walked to the windows downstairs, believing she had been with Hwa-Sze Lei already in the guest room the night before... (chapter 7)

We also watched Dow-Ming-Sez glowed with enthusiasm, and seemed to change totally to a new person, when he's standing by Shan-Tsai's apartment, watching her coming home from work, after he flew back from New York in just two days knowing Shan-Tsai did not give herself to Hwa-Sze Lei in the guest room that night after all... (chapter 8)

I think somehow he knew from that moment in time that there's a space for him in Shan-Tsai's heart regardless of her feelings towards Hwa-Sze Lei; and I believe he never doubted it ever since.

That's why he didn't ask Shan-Tsai if she and Hwa-Sze Lei were actually together the night before in Sheau-Sze's hot spring villa, when he happened to walk to the yard in the villa very early in the morning the next day, only to find her sitting there alone... He himself had just rejected Sheau-Sze the night before, and decided that he would not give up his love to Shan-Tsai no matter what. (chapter 11)

Then came my favorite scene in the entire drama...

She looked very surprised to see him in the yard so early in the morning, since she assumed he had been with Sheau-Sze the whole night...

He sat down timidly to her right at a distance,

"You..." he mumbled...

"What's the matter?" she asked.

"Why did you get up so early?" he continued... "Didn't you sleep well last night?"

"Not exactly..." she replied.

"Oh, is that so...?" he added.

(It shows clearly here that Miss Hsu and Jerry express their emotions of the characters perfectly with just the tone of their voices... I also admire the scriptwriters and the director on the interpretation of this scene with enough reservation but tremendous tension between the two. I don't think any love scenes between them could ever top this one, for it's so beautifully orchestrated as if they would had experienced their first time together!)

Later on also in chapter 11, we watched Shan-Tsai burst into tears on Hwa-Sze Lei's back thinking she had lost Dow-Ming-Sez, since she'd witnessed Sheau-Sze had been on top of Dow-Ming-Sez when she'd rushed in their room the night before.

We then watched Shan-Tsai bravely declared war to Dow-Ming-Sez's mom with great spirits after learning from Sheau-Sze that nothing had happened between her and Dow-Ming-Sez in the villa that night. (chapter 12)

These scenes in chapter 11 & 12 are crucial to their relationship as Dow-Ming-Sez finally realized that he simply couldn't try to play pretence with any women he didn't love, since his body and soul were already joined closely together for his one and only love Shan-Tsai; and Shan-Tsai's shocked to find out she actually cared for Dow-Ming-Sez's body and soul altogether after all :-) And she couldn't possibly imagine herself to be with anyone else...

From this point in time, their love was recognized and matured, and they could never separate their body and soul even though they both knew they might not be able to stay together for long...

We probably would never experience such a fairy-tale romance in our life time, yet we could absolutely be in control of our body, and make sure we don't let it be used by the weak inner self to test our love for someone, or to play games with fools. We are capable of owning a version of a beautiful love story of our own anytime anywhere, as long as we put our soul into it, and let our sense lead our body.

作者: notafanyet 时间: 2005-5-17 07:14
多谢各位朋友 *^_^*

********

"道明寺与杉菜的雨"
Dow-Ming-Sez & Shan-Tsai's Rain
originally posted on Thursday, April the 4th, 2002

It was the rain... and an umbrella that brought Shan-Tsai to Dow-Ming-Sez for their very first date... after four hours. (chapter 4)

It was the rain... and all the locked doors that gave them their very first night together... with clothes on, of course. (chapter 4)

It was the rain that witnessed their heart-breaking good-bye in the mass transit station after Dow-Ming-Sez slapped Shan-Tsai's face, for he was very disappointed that she had lost faith in their future after spending just one day shopping with Sheau-Sze. (chapter 10)

It was only the raindrops, which touched Shan-Tsai's face right after Dow-Ming-Sez left, got to know how much she regretted what she just said... And she started to realize that the rain might be sent from God to tell them to stop these painful fights! (chapter 10)

It was those raindrops again that enabled us to watch one of the most stunning poses of Dow-Ming-Sez's (or should I say Jerry's)... He was slowly sitting down by the edge of the bed, putting his straightened right arm down to hold his weight, curving his right foot, and then laying his head on the wall... after he came back to his room without saying anything to F3 downstairs, looking at his right hand, which hit Shan-Tsai moments ago, and feeling terribly sorry for what he had done... (chapter 10)

I only wish I could have been one of the raindrops in Dow-Ming-Sez's hair...

It was the pouring rain (and also many cats and dogs) that gave us this memorable scene... Shan-Tsai was standing by the entrance gate of Dow-Ming-Sez's mansion with all her things packed, and telling him that she could no longer be with him, for his mom had been attacking her dearest friends'... Sheau-U's and Chin-Hur's families... (chapter 14)

It was this wettest scene between them that allowed us to start realizing how hard-working they all had been for all those long months shooting the drama, and... we got to know that Jerry used to wear contacts!

It was the last rain we saw in the drama that brought them back together, after Shan-Tsai decided to echo Dow-Ming-Sez's determination, and stood alone outside Dow-Ming-Sez's mansion for as long as it would take.

When night approached, also came the rain shooting down from God...

Inside the chandeliered living room of the mansion...

"Why are you still so blind to the truth here? Do you really know who this person is that has been lying there upstairs for days? It's no one but your son!"

"He is still that young, and there are so many possibilities waiting ahead of him... Why do you have to make decisions for him at this early stage of his young life?"

The remarks from Dow-Ming-Sez's sister worked on Mom, temporarily...

And I keep wondering what had happened to the light blue jacket of Shan-Tsai's after she put it on Dow-Ming-Sez to keep him warm by the stairs of the 12th floor, and he still had it on right before he stepped into the taxi the next morning after the very first rain...

Maybe the taxi driver had it!

作者: kikico 时间: 2005-5-17 08:50
谢谢Grace!
想念流星花园1。这两天还在看其原著漫画哈。嘿嘿

希望Grace有空也来灌水发表你的大作哈，期待~~~~~~~~

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